Need a Site Critique...Please...

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Hi Warriors!

Twitter seems to be the social phenomenon...

So, I've created a service that helps people with Twitter.

I need honest opinions on my site design and layout since it's done 100% through Photoshop.

Here's the site (it is incomplete at the time...almost done...)

Pavon Dunbar's Custom Twitter Retweet Pages

Your opinions are appreciated...both positive and negative.

Thanks in advance and have a good weekend, guys and gals!

Pavon
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  • I agree... who in their right mind would give you their twitter password??
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    • I completely understand the concern both you and Mr. Justin has regarding the retweet function.

      The site is designed around the Viral Tweet software program. The script asks users to enter their twitter username and password and verifies it against Twitter so that the retweet message would appear in your status list.

      I am not asking for a critique of the software. It's built into the website. I'm asking for a critique of the site layout/design, etc.

      Some people will retweet it...others will not. I completely understand that.

      The purpose of the site is to offer a service whereby I custom design Twitter Retweet Pages and give the client options on what he or she wants on the site...

      Many have heard of Viral Tweet and it is successful...others wouldn't use it to save their lives.

      Thank you for your responses. I appreciate it because the feedback is helpful.

      Pavon
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  • I agree with Kayaker, I like the layout, but I am not sure what I would get in return for my Twitter details

    PS one more thing, the page would look better if it was centered

    Kishor
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    • Thanks for the feedback, Kishor.

      I know what I need to do...

      I need to be more specific in what you are getting, for example, for retweeting the site to your followers.

      Saying, "Retweet This And Get A FREE Gift Valued At $497" isn't cutting it...

      Time to make corrections...

      Thank you all for your responses thus far...

      Pavon
  • I like the layout but centered would look better for me too. I would also change the font for the welcome message. At least in my browser the T's look like I's (for example Twitter looks like Iwitter).
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  • It looks suitably humourous and, more importantly, intriguing. I think anybody landing on this page would stay a while to see what it was about.

    As already mentioned, you have made a very poor choice of font for the welcome message - I had to go to 400% on my monitor to read it (not every body has 20/20 vision). You might also consider a better font for your name - after all, it does identify you! Hoch deutsch style scripts are notoriously difficult to decipher.
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