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Landing page critics??

by etelligent
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He guys

Just made a new video for my client, what do you think??

http://countrykitchens.net.au

Cheers
#critics #landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author taffie
    Wow, I think it's excellent, can't find anything to fault, it's really good.
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    • Profile picture of the author etelligent
      awesome thanks, what about the form used, do you think im just giving away their booklets too easily?
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      • Profile picture of the author Nate Simms
        Originally Posted by etelligent View Post

        He guys

        Just made a new video for my client, what do you think??

        FARMERS - Free Kitchen IDEAS Booklet - Classic and Country Kitchens

        Cheers
        Great looking landing page.

        Everything about it just screams elegant to me. Especially the video (and the music that accompanies it).

        Originally Posted by etelligent View Post

        awesome thanks, what about the form used, do you think im just giving away their booklets too easily?
        That depends.

        I am assuming you built this page for the company. Are they aware about the process you have designed (ie., opt'ing in for a free design booklet)? If so, it should not be a problem. In the end, they are building a database of interested persons to build a relationship with.
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      • Profile picture of the author StingGB
        Wow, that's impressive.
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  • Profile picture of the author BeeJay
    Dude! Nice looking page.
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    • Profile picture of the author taffie
      Yeah I don't think you are giving the booklet easily, isn't that the way it should be done?
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    I think it looks very nice.

    Just make sure you have the rights to be using the images and music inside your video because if you do not, you can land your client in some very hot water.
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  • Profile picture of the author Warrior X
    Looks great. For me, in Firefox, the headline above the sign-up form gets overlapped by the picture. Reads as "Free idea bookl- sent to your hom- "
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  • Profile picture of the author bizgrower
    Excellent. Very attractive and the booklet form is fine for a high end product.

    If the postage expense becomes too much, they could convert to a free e-version of the booklet/report/lifestyle query which would help prospects with kitchen choices.

    The only negative thing I did note is that the page loads slowly - several seconds before anything starts to load on the page, which is now a google SEO factor and slightly annoying to visitors. Windows 7/IE 9 (I think - latest browser version anyway).

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    • Profile picture of the author ScottieDog
      A very nice, clean layout. Really great job!

      One poster mentioned the image overlapping in Firefox, i´m using Firefox (Mac) and it is not overlapping on my browser. Just FYI. Perhaps you fixed it since his post.
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      • Profile picture of the author Gail_Curran
        The video looks nice, but the text in it is too small, doesn't stay in view long enough to read, and contains several errors.

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        • Profile picture of the author Alexa Smith
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          Originally Posted by Gail_Curran View Post

          The video looks nice, but the text in it is too small, doesn't stay in view long enough to read, and contains several errors.
          This. Exactly.

          In a sense, it could be argued that one of these two problems "compensates for the other" to some extent: the fact that the text is too small and disappears too quickly perhaps reduces the chances of people noticing the mistakes in it?

          The page itself certainly looks very nice.

          Your client must own some kind of licence/rights to use the music, presumably?

          I was slightly surprised to see "phone number required" to receive the free booklet, but presumably they've tested carefully and know what they're doing?
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  • Profile picture of the author fnoperi1
    I think It looks great better than my landing page I created, lol.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kevin McNally
    Nice looking website, loved the video.

    I would add an arrow > highlighting the optin form for longer at the end of video. .

    Site takes ages to load for me, this will effect your optin rate for sure.

    Your client needs to split test small things to get the best opt in rate.

    At the end of the day it doesn't really matter what we think, it's all about results for the client. Some of the ugliest landing pages convert well.

    Good job, site looks the business.
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