Elmer just went through our new LPP project. Now, since we have two writers on this one (James B Allen and myself) the occasional stupid mistake does creep in. James proofed it, I skim-proofed it, a number of reviewers went over it ... but Elmer still found about a few dozen "pending improvements". Not just anal grammar stuff, but wording that will have more effect.
Elmer truly is a valued help. The little tweaks he suggested here will make LPP an even better read, and get the point across crystal clear.
Now, I know that Elmer likes to take on a couple of these projects and can always use cigarette money (filthy habit), so I'm letting you know about this secret weapon.
Please: Don't PM me asking where he is. Look for him in the forum. He's the friendly guy with the Col Sanders beard.