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My New Squeeze Page, What Do You Think?

by Zach Booker
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Hey guys,

I just had a new squeeze page made and I was wondering if some warriors could help me out and give me some tips on maybe some ways to improve it.

theimjourney.com/gift

One comment I got was that most people will not know what the 'IM' means in the url 'theimjourney.com'.

Do you think that this could effect conversions, or do you think that people will clue in that 'IM' must have something to do with money due to the graphics.

Another thing is that after you fill in the form you go to the ordinary aweber page where it says 'confirm your email'. Should I have a separate webpage made where it says 'go confirm your email etc' or just stick with the aweber one?

Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it,

Zach
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  • Profile picture of the author millionairemoney
    I didn't catch what IM meant until I saw your page.

    The page looks ok. I'd give it 5.7/10.
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    • Profile picture of the author graphicsgenie
      Hi Zach,

      Hows it go mate?

      Think it needs a fair bit more work, perhaps the header is a bit big, the signup box is half cut off been above the fold.

      You know i'm a perfectionist, but to me, if your stating you are making $100 + a day then putting a couple of days profits to pay for a great design would be the way I go.

      If you want to know who I recommend to redo the design, ... well you can imagine its someone close ;o)
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  • Profile picture of the author ecoverartist
    The yellow on gray is a bit hard to read as is the beveled text. I personally know what IM means but like others have said, it might be confusing to beginners.

    Like GraphicsGenie said, if you truly do make $100 a day, a more action-oriented design that piques people's curiosity should definitely get your conversions rolling!
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  • Profile picture of the author AlbertF
    I would say a more professional stand still and more people will believe in the product your selling like ecoverarist said above. Just add more personal touches to it and it should be ready to run.
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  • Profile picture of the author jasonl70
    just from personal experience - pretty graphics, etc, are not required.

    Just a good headline and intro paragraph, followed by some solid bullet statement's of benefits, can still pull in 30%+ conversions.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark J. Forsythe
    Hey Zach,

    I would suggest you redo the design. The header graphics is too big and is not necessarily needed.

    The red text is hard to read and the fact that it is almost the same size as the blue text makes it a lot to take in. The ECover is great but I would also suggest that you add some bullet points highlighting the main benefits to support it.

    Hope this helps!
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  • Profile picture of the author jasonl70
    61 people have read this..

    figure at least 20 went to the page. All people in the target niche.

    How many have opted in?

    It LOOKS nice.. I just question it's ability to convert.
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    • Profile picture of the author anth.elias
      Yep, too overbearing, makes me want to click away..sometimes simple is better..and kinda of looks pasted together.

      If I had an ebook that racked $40,000 in sales I would not give it away let alone free.

      Most people are going to be thinking this way...that's a big claim and usually if sounds too good to be true it is. And by the way you spelled racked raked.
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      • Profile picture of the author jasonl70
        Originally Posted by aelias View Post

        Yep, too overbearing, makes me want to click away..sometimes simple is better..and kinda of looks pasted together.

        If I had an ebook that racked $40,000 in sales I would not give it away let alone free.

        Most people are going to be thinking this way...that's a big claim and usually if sounds too good to be true it is. And by the way you spelled racked raked.
        good points - just wanted to point out the spelling thing though. I think this what he is referring to:

        "I raked the leaves"
        "I raked in 40k"
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  • Profile picture of the author enterpryzman
    I like the look, good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author Fernando Veloso
    Are you targeting newbies Zach? I ask cause that approach might work for them, but now for older guys like me.

    It's not trustworthy for me, its too flashy.

    Best,
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  • Profile picture of the author JMarno
    The guy on the cover definitely looks older than 15!
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    • Profile picture of the author SeanyG
      You have the right idea. Nice work.

      My first thought though was "another IM landing page....with the cheezy dollar bills and money signs at the top".
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  • Profile picture of the author gabibeowulf
    I don't think it will work too good for you. My squeeze pages are all text only and work out great "david de angelo" style.

    All the pretty graphics only confuse the visitor, rather than motivate him. You might also include a video telling the visitor what's your offer about, how can your offer benefit him and what he needs to do to get it (enter his email to get the free report)
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  • Profile picture of the author Shannon Herod
    Try changing the red headline text to the color #cc0000

    I personally could not read it because it was too loud.

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