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Need an opinion about my landingpage

by mandos123
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Hello folks,

I was wondering if anyone could criticize or review my website landing page: www(dot)ivideocourse(dot)net

It's not fully complete yet (some pictures have to be changed + other pages or not ready), but I hope maybe someone can give a honest overview about the landingpage itself. What should I change? What should I add? Recommendation and suggestions are more than welcome!

Thanks!
#landingpage #opinion #review #website
  • Profile picture of the author NewRiseDigital
    nice layout. Quick tip (read Dan Ariely's fantastic book Predictably Irrational for why this works) put your 3rd option of the eBook + Videos at $47 the same as the video price. Everyone will pay you $47 (and possibly think your mad, but it works)
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  • Profile picture of the author Don Schenk
    Mandos,

    I had to laugh, because I bought an iPhone 5 about 2 months ago, and had to spend 3 days searching YouTube, going through Apple's 156 page destruction manual for the iPhone, and hours of experimenting.

    When I opened your site the first thing I saw was...

    "iPhone Video Course
    Learn to use your iPhone at its full potential. For Only $ TBA."

    Immediately I thought, "Why would someone pay to learn to use an iPhone when there are free YouTube videos, and Apple makes a 156 page destruction manual .pdf. It's free.

    Then I scrolled down and read this:
    "I bought it for $500 and keep saying “I don’t know how to use it.”
    I finally started learning, and it took me 3 days."

    Ah ha! I could have saved three days if I had your course. That's it!

    By leading off with telling you are selling something, and giving the price, you will have people click away from your site without even reading the page. The page needs to lead off with the thinking that is already going on in someone's head before they get to your site. Acknowledge their problem first, and promise they will learn the solution if only they will continue to read.

    This message "I bought it for $500 and keep saying “I don’t know how to use it.”
    I finally started learning, and it took me 3 days," does that.

    :-Don
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  • Profile picture of the author mandos123
    Thanks Don. You got me something to think about
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  • Profile picture of the author TheBigBee
    Originally Posted by mandos123 View Post

    Hello folks,

    I was wondering if anyone could criticize or review my website landing page: www(dot)ivideocourse(dot)net

    It's not fully complete yet (some pictures have to be changed + other pages or not ready), but I hope maybe someone can give a honest overview about the landingpage itself. What should I change? What should I add? Recommendation and suggestions are more than welcome!

    Thanks!
    Have a relevant headline, then a video on the left with a contact form on the right. Offer some "incentive" for them to give their number to you. Then integrate UberTransfers (no up front cost + dirt cheap) to get them on the phone immediately. Talking with them while they have their phone in their hand makes selling the solution to the problem more tangible; literally.
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