What do you think of the website i made?

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Let me know what you guys think. i'm new to internet marketing and this is mt first swing at it. Let me know what you guys think. Thanks in advance,

This is the website i made guys.

http://instaprofitgramreview.com/


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#1 when you google instaprofitgram reviews
#7 when you google instaprofitgram

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  • Profile picture of the author Stuart Walker
    The header image is rubbish.
    Your review is terrible and badly written with poor punctuation.

    I wouldn't buy that system based on your review.
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  • Profile picture of the author Alex Blades
    Looks decent, but you need to add a couple more call to actions, "click here for info" (cloaked link) for example..
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  • Profile picture of the author weigemeiser
    I didn't read the content of the blogs so I can't comment "RockingLastForever" has said.

    The call to action link is currently on the bottom of the page (your first blog). If you're going to add more posts, then it's going to get pushed further down. Although you have clickable links in your blogs, they are not as obvious. Put it on the right column (widget) so people can see it when they get to your blog. I would even put it above "about me".
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  • Profile picture of the author theaccountant
    Hey at least he tried
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  • Profile picture of the author CharlesL
    Pretty terrible.

    1) Header text doesn't even fit.
    2) Copy is littered with basic punctuation and grammar errors.
    3) No favicon.
    4) Only three posts

    I'll leave it at that for now.
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert02011
    I like your website looks like a good clean website well done.
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  • Profile picture of the author Sue McDonald
    Really didn't like it at all and the spelling and grammar are appalling. If you cannot spell you should get someone else to proof read it for you. Obviously the spelling checker you used or didn't use didn't pick up the errors.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Originally Posted by chrischris15 View Post

    Let me know what you guys think. i'm new to internet marketing and this is mt first swing at it. Let me know what you guys think. Thanks in advance,

    This is the website i made guys.

    Instaprofitgram Review


    Promotes: Instaprofitgram
    Ranks:
    #1 when you google instaprofitgram reviews
    #7 when you google instaprofitgram

    P.s. sorry if i my post is in the wrong thread.
    Good effort. Take a little time to go over what you've written. Run it through a grammar checker or get someone to help you. Spend $10 and get yourself a professional header done. Clean this thing up and you'll be fine. And don't listen to rude, small minded people.
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  • Profile picture of the author dadamson
    As stated above, the header is horrible, doesn't even line up nicely, the review is poorly written. Think about it from the visitors perspective, would YOU buy this product based only on your review? I wouldn't!

    I would even question whether you have even used Instaprofitgram and have made $50 per day? - If you haven't then don't review it! Create a website about a product or niche you LOVE, the result will be much better than a thin blatent affiliate site.

    I really wanted to go into the site and prove the other people on this thread wrong, unfortunately I have to agree with them as they are spot on. It needs much more than just a clean up.
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  • Profile picture of the author theaccountant
    You can tell who the real marketers are : they follow the money , others look for niches that they love
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    • Profile picture of the author Ian Jackson
      Originally Posted by theaccountant View Post

      You can tell who the real marketers are : they follow the money , others look for niches that they love
      With respect, real marketers focus first and foremost on providing good quality information.

      OP: with respect, it would be better if you uploaded a picture of yourself looking rather more "presentable", and looking into the lense of your camera. Sorry, but I'm going to be rude... IMHO your appearance certainly doesn't look to like that of someone with whom I would want to do business - which is one assumes, is the image you want to give... right?

      Also, it looks as though you are being distracted by your iphone and that your potential customer is not your #1 focus. Smarten yourself up and give the camera your eye. I suspect you thought it would look as though you had an important call to tend to, but it doesn't, it just looks as though you are easily distracted.

      Yes, as already covered in the thread, attention to grammar and links. People will forgive presentation if your info is good quality. The appearance of your website is secondary to the information you provide, irrespective of how much competition you do or don't have. Review sites are one tough, time-consuming, nut to crack - they wouldn't be my advice for a beginner, no way!

      Just my 2c
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  • Profile picture of the author preets
    Good effort from a 17 year old boy.
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    • Profile picture of the author salegurus
      Originally Posted by preets View Post

      Good effort from a 17 year old boy.
      He probably does not know he has to be 18 to join WF.
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      • Profile picture of the author DerekGann
        I don't like the header. Improve the header image.
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        • Profile picture of the author lisakynan
          It looks a lot better then what my first website looked like A bit more experience and you will be great! Just remember there is a lot more out there then selling "make money" products"
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  • Profile picture of the author lucidbs
    Originally Posted by chrischris15 View Post

    Let me know what you guys think. i'm new to internet marketing and this is mt first swing at it. Let me know what you guys think. Thanks in advance,

    This is the website i made guys.

    Instaprofitgram Review – $50 Daily From instagram?


    Promotes: Instaprofitgram
    Ranks:
    #1 when you google instaprofitgram reviews
    #7 when you google instaprofitgram

    P.s. sorry if i my post is in the wrong thread.
    Congrats for taking action! The page looks decent of course it could be much better.

    1. grammar check
    2. cloak aff link
    3. add video review

    It's the attitude that matters most. Way to go dude.

    Regards,
    Toby
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    • Profile picture of the author Kush Sharma
      Great stuff..Though you can certainly work on making it look better..I'm working on something similar.

      Can you reveal how long it took you to get to the top of google? did you do any backlinking or just relied on the EMD?
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Ferguson
    The bottom of your sidebar is a bit messy. Tidy that up a bit.

    It's a good start for a first effort. No one gets it right first time. "Learn to crawl before you can walk" as my mother used to say.

    Take on board the constructive criticism above and keep improving. The fact you are ranking in the top 10 for those keywords is a nice start.

    Onwards and upwards!
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  • Profile picture of the author rosetrees
    The theme you are using is rather old fashioned. It's a rather conservative choice for a young man fresh out of school. Use something more jazzy and fun.

    Your grammar and punctuation is very poor. About 5th grade. You are wrong when you say school got in the way of you being a life guard. Being a life guard got in the way of school.

    Basic grammer and punctuation seem so boring at school. They aren't. They are fundamental to being able to communicate with your customers.

    Take some time to read - books, magazines, newspaper websites. Look at how they use punctuation and grammar. At the very least learn to use a capital letter at the start of each sentence.

    Having said all that - well done for getting started. If you never start you can never improve. Many people who come here never take that first step. Once you've started you can learn, improve and grow.

    Keep working at it and good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author J.Agnew.JD
    Start over!
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    • Profile picture of the author UnclePeter
      I like the extra $250 you made by adding 5 weeks to the year.

      I think I'll try that.

      Your site needs a tweak here and there. Nothing major, spellchecker is a must. Most people aren't expecting bells and whistles on a review site.
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  • Profile picture of the author TroyCo
    That was his second post and he got banned lol
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  • Profile picture of the author Sam Woods
    This is how I started out (although I was Affiliate for Amazon). Personally I think that its a good 1st step as you can learn what works and what doesn't. A favicon would look good(it may just be me but I feel this adds a lot), as well as changing 57 weeks to 52 , header, spelling, use <h> tags a bit more? etc. Good luck on it and stick at it!
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  • Profile picture of the author theaccountant
    There was a guy about 8 years ago completely under the radar was making 20 million a year. His website was worse that this one not the grammar mind you but truly ugly. But he had his nichce right until he started to crow about it and then made it beautiful. All downhill from there
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  • Profile picture of the author JackieJCook
    Not bad ...I think this is one of your first try at Review Website?

    I would think you are already better than 95% of the "Would-Be" Marketers ! ...Just by doing something ...
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  • Profile picture of the author Edk
    I better comment on just one thing. The header needs to be 'chunkier' I'd say. Also 'reversed-out' writing which is what you have in the header is usually a no-no. It's a no-no because it isn't always the easiest to read.

    There are some cheap (and good!) headers you can buy off Fiverr. Good luck. And kudos to you for having the pluck to show us your first effort.
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