Can you critique my Squeeze page please....

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Hey guys..

If you have got a minute could you critique THIS SQUEEZE PAGE I think its nice but you tell me


Kal.


P.S.

Don't enter your email, Aweber form is non operable for obvious reasons.
#critique #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author butterballs8
    I see spelling and grammar mistakes...
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  • Profile picture of the author Kal Sallam
    Yes you are correct can't believe I missed that! it's fixed now.
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  • Profile picture of the author mekdroid
    Hi Kal,

    1) You have some typos in your squeeze page, should fix that.
    2) I think you should give your customers a bit more detail of what it is that you are selling ... I would not enter my e-mail on a page like that without knowing anything about it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Joan Altz
    For me it seems too unbelievable. Thousands every day? Come on. I'd pass it up for that reason alone.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mike Hlatky
    "Explains" "Thousands"

    The guy with the eyes pointing down seems a little cheesy to me. But, it might work. You just have to test it.
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    • Profile picture of the author Kal Sallam
      Originally Posted by Mike Hlatky View Post

      "Explains" "Thousands"

      The guy with the eyes pointing down seems a little cheesy to me. But, it might work. You just have to test it.
      Yeah I'm just testing things out now I appreciate your input Mike!
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  • Profile picture of the author Izerman
    It looks kinda cool, I have to admit.
    But I'm not quite sure how well a squeeze page with that little info will do?
    In my experience the best results come with "longer" squeeze pages that explain a little bit more about what they will recieve wehn the opt-in.
    Best of luck!

    /Izerman
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    • Profile picture of the author Kal Sallam
      Originally Posted by Izerman View Post

      It looks kinda cool, I have to admit.
      But I'm not quite sure how well a squeeze page with that little info will do?
      In my experience the best results come with "longer" squeeze pages that explain a little bit more about what they will recieve wehn the opt-in.
      Best of luck!

      /Izerman
      I have split tested "long" against "short" squeeze pages and the results were almost identical as far as the opt-in rates.

      I am pretty sure though that sales numbers would be different hence people mainly sign up due to the curiosity element with the short squeeze page version.
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  • Profile picture of the author Thomas Michal
    I'm not a fan of the waving face thing
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