Please show me how I am wrong!

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Hello:

I wish some out there would please look at my site and tell me what I am doing wrong?

The name of my site is: Occupy Wall Street Movement. net. My site is: Home Page YOUR IMAGE AS AN OCCUPIER and has been up about a full month.

I am interested in attracting and selling to young people who like these type of products.

I am selling r-shirts and hats, etc. I have amazon.com stores and have only two clicks for the entire month. I first built the site with my page with the amazon icons on page 7. Two weeks ago I moved it up to page one due to no clicks.

I am writing three articles per week to attract traffic and two or three yahoo answers.com per day.

My keyword in research showed a lot of interest, yet I receive little traffic. Am I just over reacting in a short time-frame? My amazon.com stores have only two clicks in this month.

Each week I add my articles to my site in additional pages. I use e-zine. Is it possible their demographics are for much older consumer?

Any comments will be appreciated.

Thanks.

Jim
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  • Profile picture of the author Woodward82
    Dont take this the wrong way , I dont have to much time before I have to walk out of the door. As its Sunday and family day on our end

    Your using the GoDaddy site builder. I would go with a self hosted WordPress. Also your title tags and domain structure arent keyword optimized. So I would fix that as soon as you can .

    Also get a logo and link it back to your homepage soon as i clicked through i couldnt get back to the homepage without looking around.

    Use images to capture the attention of readers the website as a whole just doesnt seem friendly enough or interesting enough for me to stay and click through.

    Sorry for the short reply, I am sure others will have many other great suggestions.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    This "movement" peaked two years ago. If I were you I'd find something more current to promote.
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