Worst book launch ever. Need an IM Jedi.

by jsand
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What's up,

I'm deep in the red with my ebook after about 5 months into the crappiest book launch ever. After messing around on Adwords for a bit (with zero success), I've realized I don't know jack about this IM stuff. I'm attempting to sell my book through 3 channels; digitally through my website, hardcopy through Amazon and also through Ebay. So far nothing has worked.

I'd like to request some legit coaching advice to help me get some book sales off the ground. The past 2 years were spent researching, organizing and writing by book, "Interview Slayer" which I'm extremely proud of. I've even attempted my hand at writing sales copy (see my website and tell me what you think). There is a considerable amount of sweat equity invested in this project, and I'd like it to become profitable at some point. As of now I'm done giving handfuls of cash to the good folks at adwords. All my campaigns are now on 'pause'.

Sales interviews/ interview coaching is a topic of which I'm an expert on, but I DO NOT want to develop a blog around my book or spend time writing blog posts about career coaching. (I'm involved in a unrelated venture now). Also I have no email list or autoresponder (crazy right?). Instead I give away free interviewing tools on my landing page and pray my visitors share or tweet my link.

Here are my questions for you IM Jedis:

1. Would I bring any value to a JV partnership?
2. Does my attempt as writing sales copy suck?
3. How the heck do I make money at this? I'm lost.

I'm just looking for advice, feel free to be brash, rude, honest or whatever- just as long as it pertains to my website Interview Slayer

Thank you for any help!

Jason
#book #jedi #launch #worst
  • Profile picture of the author Brendon Zahrndt
    Here's my first question Jason.

    Are you active on LinkedIn?

    If you're not, I have question number two for you:

    Why?

    It seems to me that the millions of people actively looking for work that are actively searching on LinkedIn would directly benefit from your expertise.

    Go where your customers are.

    You should be adding contacts like a madman right now and developing relationships.

    Start your own group there for Interviewing techniques.

    Get to it brother.
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  • Profile picture of the author ronrule
    1. Take the digital off your website and put it on Amazon for Kindle
    2. Enroll in KDP Select
    3. Make it free for 5 days

    You will have hundreds, if not thousands, of downloads during that free period (plus you'll make about 15-20 cents for every free download). This will boost the book's popularity on Amazon (a free download and a purchase are counted the same), plus people will leave reviews. After the free promo ends, visibility will be higher so people will continue to find it and you'll get a few sales right away. Then shift your website to drive the sales to the Amazon page, which when properly linked will give the user a choice between hard copy or Kindle.

    It doesn't make any sense at all to have the digital copy on your own site when all of the "readers" are already on Amazon. Go where the audience is.
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    • Profile picture of the author cashcow
      Originally Posted by ronrule View Post

      You will have hundreds, if not thousands, of downloads during that free period (plus you'll make about 15-20 cents for every free download). This will boost the book's popularity on Amazon (a free download and a purchase are counted the same), plus people will leave reviews.
      Unfortunately Amazon changed the algorithms and free downloads do not result in a boost in paid rank anymore. They count as 0 paid. And you don't get paid 15-20 cents for them (not sure where you got that info, you never got paid for free downloads … perhaps you are thinking of borrows?)

      Anyway, if the OP wants to go this route, he will not be able to sell digital copies anywhere else - so remove them from ebay and your website and clickbank (if you have it on there). You can leave your physical book up for sale though.

      Since you don't have any other books and you aren't trying to get people to your website or on a list, I don't really see how offering your book for free would get you much benefit. I mean you might get a lot of people reading it, but since it doesn't seem you are trying to brand yourself or sell something else I don't see how that benefits you.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Pescetti
    Your copy needs a lot of work. The value you're offering isn't coming through.

    You need to demonstrate more authority.

    Copywriting 101: Join the conversation your prospects are already having in their heads RIGHT NOW.

    You need to build the emotion - by communicating the circumstances people are dealing with. Agitate people's fear of rejection or not feeling "good enough" for the position they want.

    By the way...

    A VSL will be more powerful in this market IMO.

    If you're going to sell your ability to... help people sell themselves, your personality needs to come through way more. A VSL will give you that opportunity to more audaciously communicate the opportunity you're giving people to land higher paying gigs.

    Mark
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  • Profile picture of the author RogueOne
    Your sales page needs work. You might be way ahead to study some copy-writing techniques.

    It seems you put the cart way before the horse.

    You need your sales funnel setup before you ever start driving traffic. I'm not surprised no one is buying.

    Also, Adwords is not for the inexperienced,
    After messing around on Adwords for a bit
    especially one with no funnel in place.

    Re-group and try again. Don't spend any money on traffic until you have some thing to send them to. Set up an autoresponder, this is a perfect example of a niche that will profit greatly from a good follow-up series.
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  • Profile picture of the author RockNRolla
    You have your product available to download through Clickbank so you should also be concentrating on getting some affiliates to promote your product for you. Maybe try contacting recruitment consultant/job sites and see if they'd be willing to put some of your banners up (if you have any) or email your offer out to their user base.

    You could also try directly responding to people on classified sites who are putting up ads for work needed. I like the LinkedIn idea that Brendon mentioned too, that would be my first port of call after contactign as many job and recruitment consulting sites to promote the produtc via clickbank.
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  • Profile picture of the author jbsmith
    I agree - your copy and web design need some work. You have fallen into the trap that many new ebook authors (and in fact IM'ers) fall into - hitting Adwords too early.

    If you hit Adwords at all before you understand the conversions of your site it should be simply to test headline or major sales page elements only.

    Instead - early traffic should come from content, publicity (interviews, syndication, reviews, etc...) and some early partners (who understand you are just starting out)

    In terms of improving the copy, there are many issues, a few of which are:

    1. Too much emphasis on the big blue header graphic, get rid of it and either try a headline only or a smaller (in height) graphic that still lets the emphasis be put on your headline. Your headline should GRAB your users attention, not some guy with his arms in the air

    2. I would try some additional headlines, something like "You Want That Executive Sales Position...Simple, Proven X-Step Interview Process Improves Your Win Rate By X%" You want to be blunt, hit exactly what they want (that top notch sales position) and be specific about the results they can get

    3. Your first paragraph after the headline is some of the most important copy on your page (we have found this over and over again in our sales pages) - it should a) Reinforce the pain they are experiencing - failure, losing, time consuming, stressful, etc... and then quickly get to why you have FINALLY solved the problem for them - then follow that with your first and strongest testimonial.

    4. Your sub-heads should tell a story...1) Losing The Big Job is Stressful and Frustrating 2) Why Your Are Losing Out 3) How A Few Simple Tweaks Can Turn it All Around 4) No Risk Offer, etc...

    I would also be simultaneously operating a blog around your target market of sales professionals - providing solid content around finding, learning more about and capturing sales positions. This will attract traffic, build relationships and makes you look more professional. Done correctly, your blog can quickly be the source of hundreds of unique visitors to your sales page each day without relying on Adwords, then increase from there. Also- you should have an opt-in page that helps you build a list from that blog which then allows you to more actively market to your most interested prospects increasing your conversions substantially.

    Hope these tips help,

    Jeff
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    • Profile picture of the author jsand
      Holy Smokes! Thank you everybody for your valued feedback. I have some work to do tonight. So here's what I'm going to embark on asap:

      -Get my butt on LinkedIn
      -Modify or eliminate my header (yup I made that on Photoshop all myself)
      -Do the free download thing through KDP Select

      It's also back to the drawing board with my sales copy.

      I do think a VSL would be a great idea, but they're so dang expensive. Any reliable, value-oriented VSL creators anybody might suggest?

      Here's to excessive caffeine and vitamin D deficiency! I'm getting on it.

      Thank you again WARRIORS!

      -J
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    Your salespage is way too busy.

    The first moment I land on your page my eyes do not know where to look. There are about a thousand things all trying to get my attention. That is a BIG problem. When I land on your page there should only be ONE thing that sticks out like a sore thumb to me and that should be your benefit driven headline. If people don't know where to look they don't stick around to work things out, they just click the back button. Something has to scream out at them right away otherwise you have lost them forever.

    Also I would get rid of that huge header image because it serves no purpose.
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    • Profile picture of the author jsand
      Thanks Will. That's some great information. I'm going to embark on some major sales page modifications once I get the kids to bed.

      Great info!
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      • Profile picture of the author Anita Hampl
        Just a few quick observations. Please see my suggestion at the end of this post.

        * The first line (Now on Sale, Save $10) is underlined, implying that it is clickable. That irritates visitors who try to click on it.

        * Common sales page wisdom is to not let the reader leave the page unless they click the buy button-- or hit the back button to exit. By having links to Twitter, you risk losing your reader to the Twitterverse.

        * This one concerns me: you use the first-person through out most of the sales letter, BUT when you talk about the high-profile 2012 clients, you say "Here are the companies WE'VE helped placed candidates with:" That could make a visitor wonder if YOU have the "magic" or if you work with a team that gets results and you happened to write a book ...

        My totally unsolicited suggestion is that you look into hiring a copywriter to redo this for you. (I am not offering my services, so no bias here.)

        If you have truly put years and tears into your book--and it's a legit product, not just the "make-money-on-the-internet report of the month"--it deserves professional handling to make it attractive to professional job seekers and recruiters, online and offline.

        You have a lot of good material on the sales page, it just needs to be cleaned up by someone with a track record.

        Best wishes for success,
        Anita

        p.s. LOVE the graphic with "I don't always crush my interviews . . . " KEEP it, maybe even put it "above the fold."
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    • Profile picture of the author Jesus Perez
      Originally Posted by WillR View Post

      Your salespage is way too busy.

      The first moment I land on your page my eyes do not know where to look. There are about a thousand things all trying to get my attention. That is a BIG problem. When I land on your page there should only be ONE thing that sticks out like a sore thumb to me and that should be your benefit driven headline. If people don't know where to look they don't stick around to work things out, they just click the back button. Something has to scream out at them right away otherwise you have lost them forever.

      Also I would get rid of that huge header image because it serves no purpose.
      This is exactly what happened to me. The header was a big culprit in my experience.

      Your salescopy needs to be completely rebuilt from scratch.

      Oh and your buy button doesn't work in Firefox 21.0. It just "flashes" the page when I click it instead of going to CB.
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    Another small thing. Try not to use the word 'Learn' in your headline. Most people look at the word 'learn' and equate it to time and hard work, two things they don't want.

    A better word is 'Discover'.
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    • Profile picture of the author korwil
      jsand - As someone who is going to be looking for a job soon.. maybe you can help people out with that as well. For example, go to career builder or try this website or something along those lines because there are going to be A LOT of college kids leaving school who cannot find work. For me, I got my undergraduate degree in Information Systems and now I'm finishing my MBA in August just so I can stand out in a crowd of applicants.

      Also, I know someone who attacked the interview niche before and struggled. Don't let this get you down though because I know that this person now makes over $1,000/day and probably around $5,000/day.
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  • Profile picture of the author cpoalmighty
    Two things I noticed about your site:

    1. The buy now option is way down at the end (there should be more than one buy now buttons and one of them should be at the top with a killer slogan for those who get hooked by the introduction)

    2. Stick to one vernacular of language. You used a word such as "bro" in one of your images which throws me off quite a bit. I think you should stick to standard English as the vernacular throughout your script to give it that professional sound to it.
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    • Profile picture of the author WillR
      Originally Posted by cpoalmighty View Post

      Two things I noticed about your site:

      1. The buy now option is way down at the end (there should be more than one buy now buttons and one of them should be at the top with a killer slogan for those who get hooked by the introduction)
      Not necessarily.

      You will see most good sales pages have their buy button or order form down at the end. The reason being that you don't want people to feel they are being sold to right away. You might know it's a salespage but the average person who doesn't see many salespages will not. But if you have a big fat buy button at the top they will know right away that what they are reading is just one big sales message. You want to give people time to get hooked into your sales message BEFORE you show them any buy buttons or mention you have anything for sale.
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      • Profile picture of the author jsand
        This is extremely educational.

        Anita, you highlighted some very relevant points that I will put into action.

        So now I'm off to brew a strong cuppa green tea and *attempt* to revise my sales copy. If the final product is still lukewarm, I'll head over to the sales copy thread and pony up some cash for a pro to help me out.

        Thank you all again!

        -J
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    J,

    Sorry one other big thing I noticed is this line at the very top of the page:

    "Now on Sale: Save $10.00!"

    Immediately that tells people they have landed on a salespage and so their guard goes up right away and they start to be cynical about everything they are reading. It's just what we naturally do as humans. You don't want that.

    The simple rule in sales is to never reveal your price or ask for money until you have first presented the value to the prospect. Show them what the product can do for them before there is any mention of price.

    Since this is a niche where people won't be accustomed to sales pages you should use that in your favor. Make the page look more like a news article or the like so what they think they are reading is free information and as they go down you suck them into your offer by presenting them with all of the benefits and once you have done that (and only then), show them your offer.

    Always at least try and follow the AIDA principle in all the marketing you do. You can read about that here:
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/AIDA_(marketing)
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  • Profile picture of the author John Romaine
    Originally Posted by jsand View Post

    The past 2 years were spent researching, organizing and writing by book, "Interview Slayer"
    Jason, this is a huge mistake.

    Get product out FAST.

    2 years is far too long. Aim for once a month.
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    • Profile picture of the author ronrule
      Originally Posted by John Romaine View Post

      Jason, this is a huge mistake.

      Get product out FAST.

      2 years is far too long. Aim for once a month.
      I don't know about that, I agree with what you're saying for an internet product since a lot of the data may be irrelevant by the time its ready. But the interview process generally doesn't change... too many people rush to publish with low quality content these days, I think the fact that this has two years of research behind it is a positive selling point.
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      • Profile picture of the author John Romaine
        Originally Posted by ronrule View Post

        I don't know about that, I agree with what you're saying for an internet product since a lot of the data may be irrelevant by the time its ready. But the interview process generally doesn't change... too many people rush to publish with low quality content these days, I think the fact that this has two years of research behind it is a positive selling point.
        Perhaps once a month was pushing it, since you're selling a physical copy, but my point remains.

        Too many people fuss about trying to make everything "perfect" and make no money.

        Get something done. Get it out there. Make some sales. Get some buyer feedback. Improve on it.

        Two years worth of research is a vanity metric that only the creator cares about.
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