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Please review my websites

by Jeff Harper
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Hi Warriors,

It's been a while since my last post.
I just want to have a feedback from you to all of this following websites I own.

http://www.fibroidshelp.com and Endometriosis Natural Treatment

Anyone can give me an idea how to improve the design of my websites?
I know it doesn't look good. Sorry.

Regards,
Jeff
#review #websites
  • Profile picture of the author thedog
    First impression is, you need a better logo... why not head off to fiverr, only 5 bucks and will be much better than what you got.
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    • Profile picture of the author Jeff Harper
      Originally Posted by thedog View Post

      First impression is, you need a better logo... why not head off to fiverr, only 5 bucks and will be much better than what you got.

      Thanks!!


      How 'bout some aspects of the websites?
      Do they look good?
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      • Profile picture of the author thedog
        Originally Posted by Jeff Harper View Post

        Thanks!!


        How 'bout some aspects of the websites?
        Do they look good?
        No worries. Well, they both look pretty much the same. They look more like a sales page, than a website.

        I'd personally use a blog format, and have my promotions on the right, like your blog is now... but I'd have this as my home page.

        There's also a bunch of broken images on your blog.

        The blue on green on the opt in is a very bad color combination... white text on dark red background, give that a go.
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        • Profile picture of the author Jeff Harper
          Originally Posted by thedog View Post

          No worries. Well, they both look pretty much the same. They look more like a sales page, than a website.

          I'd personally use a blog format, and have my promotions on the right, like your blog is now... but I'd have this as my home page.

          There's also a bunch of broken images on your blog.

          The blue on green on the opt in is a very bad color combination... white text on dark red background, give that a go.
          Thanks man!

          What can you say also on the popup form?

          Thanks for advise
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          • Profile picture of the author thedog
            Originally Posted by Jeff Harper View Post

            Thanks man!

            What can you say also on the popup form?

            Thanks for advise
            The Popup "lightbox" the design could be improved, better than the inline opt in on your blog.

            I'd change the pop time to 10 - 15 seconds... better.

            If you have the budget, you should let a designer have at it... the whole site, it doesn't seem like your strong point.

            Shouldn't be too expensive to find someone in the Philippines on Odesk or Freelancer.

            If you want to do it yourself, you've a bit of a learning curve ahead of you... up to you, where you want to put your time, money and energy... but sometimes it's better to pay for a pro, and concentrate on what you're good at.
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            • Profile picture of the author Jeff Harper
              Originally Posted by thedog View Post

              The Popup "lightbox" the design could be improved, better than the inline opt in on your blog.

              I'd change the pop time to 10 - 15 seconds... better.

              If you have the budget, you should let a designer have at it... the whole site, it doesn't seem like your strong point.

              Shouldn't be too expensive to find someone in the Philippines on Odesk or Freelancer.

              If you want to do it yourself, you've a bit of a learning curve ahead of you... up to you, where you want to put your time, money and energy... but sometimes it's better to pay for a pro, and concentrate on what you're good at.
              Yeah you're right. but well I am really afraid if that contractor I will hire will mess my website.
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  • Profile picture of the author Boris Beo
    First link doesn't work for me.

    The second link, just by taking a quick look:
    - The top bar has some blinking text, which isn't clickable. Why draw so much attention to something that isn't a call-to-action, but merely a website description.
    - Install the Yoast SEO plugin. Your page has no meta title and description, which is a must.
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  • Profile picture of the author rosetrees
    I can't get the fibroid site to load, I just get a blank page.

    I would use a fixed width page. That's probably a personal thing, but I find full width pages harder to read on a wide screen as your eye is constantly moving from side to side.

    I'm totally *&^% at copywriting and have had sales pages written for me. Believe me, it's worth it.

    You asked about design:
    * fix the width of your site
    * there's a line of text across the top that is unreadable. Make it white so visitors can see and read it.
    * remove the social media buttons that take you nowhere, such as the G+ button, youtube button etc. If you don't have accounts with relevant info at these places, don't send visitors there.

    Once you get to the blog, I agree that the theme is pretty horrible. You need to adjust the size of the text in the headings and add some kind of box or lines to delineate each answer. It's muddly.

    How many visitors does your site get?
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  • Profile picture of the author KevinChapman
    The first link doesn't work for me either!

    Like thedog said, a header from fiverr would be good and I'd also add some kind of sidebar, if not two. It just makes things look a lot neater.
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    • Profile picture of the author Jeff Harper
      Originally Posted by KevinChapman View Post

      The first link doesn't work for me either!

      Like thedog said, a header from fiverr would be good and I'd also add some kind of sidebar, if not two. It just makes things look a lot neater.
      yeah. I will budget on that lol. Didn't know what's fiverr too.
      Oh well.

      Can you visit this http://www.fibroidshelp.com/

      I don't know but we've got some issue. Should I contact my hosting on that?
      My website on fibroids sometimes don't open I don't know why.
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  • Profile picture of the author pintara3
    As someone else has said the fibroid site is not loading at all
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    • Profile picture of the author Jeff Harper
      Originally Posted by pintara3 View Post

      As someone else has said the fibroid site is not loading at all
      Yeah you are right. I wonder what happened!!!! no
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