First solo ad want feedback

Well first without looking at your site it comes down to are they honest solo vendors. What your numbers tell me is that you had around a 20, 21% opt in rate total. Again this is tough because your running two solos with two different vendors it sounds. You should ideal test the conversion for each indavidaul solo you run. Even if they are the same one.

So with that said you could have one good honest vendor and somebody else that brought you down a little but Idealy you would like to have at least a 35% opt in rate per solo. You should shoot for 50% but... 2nd it as far as sales it comes down to many factors such as how your are presenting the information, what the products you are recamending is and how that sales page is. Are you sending them to a thank you page with a "one time offer" or just direct linking to the sales page. Its testing and playing around with all of this stuff.

it's hard to say without looking at the copy you are using, offer, funnel etc.. there are tons of elements that make it work or not, so I don't have enough data here to give you valid feedback

Put up the email that was blasted.

The way you prime your prospects makes a big difference in the level of receptivity they have to your offer.

I'd make a more simplified squeeze page.

This thing is WAY too busy.

Here's a squeeze page being looked at over on the copywriting forum:

Frank Kern

Study it.

Look at the simplicity of the site.

Deconstruct his irresistible offer.

Mark

Lose that moving "show me more" I can't read anything with that kinda distraction.

What countries do the clicks come from?
Do they open your first follow up email and download the freebies?

The answers will reveal how good your opt ins are.

I'm just gonna say it. I think this whole thing with guaranteed clicks smells funny. I know there are legit MMO solo ad vendors out there. But as any MMO "trend" gains momentum it attracts bottom feeders. And it's waaaaaay too easy to deliver BS clicks and optins, both with bots and real people. Another thing I'd never do is use some silly "swipe" from the vendor.

In the old days you would buy a solo ad in a popular email newsletter and pay according to how many subscribers the letter had. You could buy a full broadcast or partial. You'd take your best shot with your ad copy and you'd get what you'd get, no guarantees. That's the only way I'd advertise any solo ad and there are still plenty of legit newsletters in every possible niche selling ads this way.

I'm not saying what you bought is phony, just that it seems more and more people are showing up here lately with very strange and questionable experiences. Good luck.

I'd say your Squeeze Page is not something I'd sign up to - way to full of hype!

See Mark Pescetti's post above and take a look at Frank Kern's Squeeze Page - much better I think!

Whether the List you've built up will be a responsive list or not remains to be seen!