Why do they try to HIDE the price in those long sales letters?

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It's interesting. Everytime I read one of those hyped-up sales letters I instinctively scroll to the bottom to find out how much the item costs. But it seems they do their best to "hide" the price of their product somewhere in the script.

Why is this? Is it that they are ashamed of the high price...or that they don't think price is important...or what?? It seems the price would really stand out.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kim Standerline
    yeah it annoys the hell out of me as well, I hate having to search for the price of something,

    Kim


    Originally Posted by MikeGriffith View Post

    It's interesting. Everytime I read one of those hyped-up sales letters I instinctively scroll to the bottom to find out how much the item costs. But it seems they do their best to "hide" the price of their product somewhere in the script.

    Why is this? Is it that they are ashamed of the high price...or that they don't think price is important...or what?? It seems the price would really stand out.
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    • Profile picture of the author BlueStar
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      Because they are Smart marketers. They know people go to the bottom and make a first impression based upon price. By placing the price in the article or making you go to another page it increases conversions.

      Conversions is all that counts.

      Test, Test, and more Test.
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      • Profile picture of the author MikeGriffith
        I agree, in a way, BlueStar, but...let me be a bit silly here...
        If the grocery stores started hiding the price of their products in the ingredient label instead of in bold price tags on the shelf, would that increase their sales? After all, they're making you see the value of what you're buying --before you pull out your wallet.
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        • Profile picture of the author JohnMcCabe
          Originally Posted by MikeGriffith View Post

          I agree, in a way, BlueStar, but...let me be a bit silly here...
          If the grocery stores started hiding the price of their products in the ingredient label instead of in bold price tags on the shelf, would that increase their sales? After all, they're making you see the value of what you're buying --before you pull out your wallet.
          Mike, I'll see your silly and raise you one...

          Here in the USA, Memorial Day is coming - one of the major holidays for outdoor grilling. Let's say I want to serve my guests a nice grilled filet.

          I can get them from the local Wal-Mart, where the prices are prominently displayed in the case, for around $12 a pound.

          I can order them from Omaha Steaks for around $22 a pound.

          Or I can get Dean & DeLuca "Private Reserve Center Cut Filets" for around $60 a pound.

          All cuts come from the same part of a cow, yet DeanDeLuca.com gets five times the price for steak that Wal-Mart gets.

          If hiding the price in the copy (or deep in the site) got you five times the return on each sale because you got a chance to tell your story and build value, would you do it?

          Would you at least test it to see if your overall returns were better?

          Looking at the back end, I'd rather have a smaller list of buyers who have proven to have lower price resistance to what I offer, all else being equal.

          It may be annoying, but there's likely money in the madness...
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          • Profile picture of the author JasonC.biz
            This bugs me too. The thing is though, that I don't read more of the sales letter, so they don't have more of a chance to sell me. I spend a minute looking for a dollar amount. If I can't find one I click the order button to see what the price is.

            If I don't like it, I back out. If the price sounds reasonable, then I'll go read more of the sales letter to decide if I want to buy or not.

            Personally, hiding the price just makes me frustrated and does nothing to bring me closer to buying.

            Jason
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            • Profile picture of the author billspaced
              Originally Posted by JasonC.biz View Post

              This bugs me too. The thing is though, that I don't read more of the sales letter, so they don't have more of a chance to sell me. I spend a minute looking for a dollar amount. If I can't find one I click the order button to see what the price is.

              If I don't like it, I back out. If the price sounds reasonable, then I'll go read more of the sales letter to decide if I want to buy or not.

              Personally, hiding the price just makes me frustrated and does nothing to bring me closer to buying.

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                • Profile picture of the author Martin Luxton
                  I was just watching an old episode of "The West Wing".

                  The opposition candidate leaked a smear video against the president asking

                  "What is Jed Bartlett hiding now?"

                  Translation:
                  You can't trust Jed Bartlett because he's hiding something.

                  Who can you trust?

                  Me! Because I exposed him. I am the white knight unmasking evil where'er it might be.

                  Undermine the existing authority and replace them.

                  "try" also helps the idea because it suggests they were unsuccessful because my eagle eye spotted their nefarious deeds and foiled their dastardly plot.

                  This is Watergate all over again!

                  Where's my Pulitzer prize, Mr Myers?

                  (and this is definitely my last try)

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          • Profile picture of the author Intrepreneur
            I don't know much about the tactic but now it has been discussed I'm glad to see some of the ideas surrounding it.

            It has actually made me think back to the last few times I've been on such a salespage, which shocked me on first thought.

            It works..

            Because I've just realised that it actually forces me to go back and read the copy to see what I'm getting for my money.

            Maybe it has that affect on many people and that is why it is used.
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    To get you into the buy-flow.

    Yes, it's shady.
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  • Profile picture of the author JohnMcCabe
    Mike, one reason some copywriters do this is to give themselves a chance to build value for their product.

    If I tell you I have a small picture of an old-time baseball player, and I want you to give me $100,00 for it, do you whip out your checkbook?

    Doubtful.

    If I tell you I have a Honus Wagner baseball card, does that motivate you?

    If you collect baseball cards, it would get your attention.

    If I told you it was a mint condition, authenticated card that once sold at auction for over $1 million dollars, but was now being offered at the bargain price of $100K to settle an estate, would you be interested?

    Probably.

    If you had the means, and it was the last one you needed to complete a collection, you'd knock people over to be the first one in line with your checkbook.

    Well, the copywriters who hide prices in the copy are doing what they can to start a race to the front of the room, rather than lose possible buyers by hitting them with a price before they have a chance to tell their story.

    Now the folks who won't tell me the price without clicking the order button do bug me. But that's simply my personal reaction. It might test out as an effective tactic, even if it annoys me.
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Originally Posted by MikeGriffith View Post

    It's interesting. Everytime I read one of those hyped-up sales letters I instinctively scroll to the bottom to find out how much the item costs. But it seems they do their best to "hide" the price of their product somewhere in the script.

    Why is this? Is it that they are ashamed of the high price...or that they don't think price is important...or what?? It seems the price would really stand out.
    To get back at the 'cheaters' who want to read the end of the book,
    know how the movie will end and pick the blossoms instead of waiting
    for the fruit.

    As stated before, there is an ORDER of persuasion and giving the price
    upfront (EXCEPT when the price is the selling point as in a sale) is
    cutting down the sales tree even before it is planted.

    What may annoy some makes the marketer more sales.

    Truth be told, you can't sell to many without annoying a few anyway.

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  • Profile picture of the author Amy Bass
    I ALWAYS check the price first. If it is in my budget, I then go back and read the sales page to see if it is worth it. If it is way out of my price range, I just close out of the page... why read it and get tempted to buy something I cannot afford?

    I have seen sales pages that don't even list the price, you have to click on the order button to see what number actually comes up!
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    • Profile picture of the author marketopoly
      Originally Posted by Amy Bass View Post

      I ALWAYS check the price first. If it is in my budget, I then go back and read the sales page to see if it is worth it. If it is way out of my price range, I just close out of the page... why read it and get tempted to buy something I cannot afford?

      I have seen sales pages that don't even list the price, you have to click on the order button to see what number actually comes up!
      I agree with you, Ami.

      I find it annoying having to go to the order page to see the price, particularly if I'm on slow speed broadband or dial-up and the initial sales page copy is long winded.
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      • Profile picture of the author ExRat
        Hi,

        Why do they try to HIDE the price in those long sales letters?
        Because the split test results suggested that they should do so :rolleyes:
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    • Profile picture of the author deannatroupe
      It annoys the crap out of me too. That's why I always try to put the price at the top of the letter to give people the information that they need up front. Yah, I know they won't read the whole sales letter, but if I've done my preselling correctly, then they'll have enough info. I hope I made sense to you.
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      • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
        Originally Posted by deannatroupe View Post

        It annoys the crap out of me too. That's why I always try to put the price at the top of the letter to give people the information that they need up front. Yah, I know they won't read the whole sales letter, but if I've done my preselling correctly, then they'll have enough info. I hope I made sense to you.
        Good idea. Maybe we should all just eschew proven marketing tactics in favor of what we "think" will work without testing it.

        For all of you bitching and moaning that it doesn't work - test it. Do a hard, scientific test, then if you're right, come back and let us know.

        But I can bet you won't be back.

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        • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
          Jim,
          The point I was trying to make is that you have to get people pulled in and think that the product is what they need. Most newbies will by this stuff and not do anything with it. Their fault. They will then move on to the next great product.
          Ah. I got something different from it. I was a bit surprised, because what I thought you were saying didn't sound like what I'm used to hearing from you, good sense-wise.

          I certainly wouldn't argue that most new folks buy stuff they won't (or sometimes can't) use. I warn against it fairly often, including in some of my sales letters.

          Dennis,
          Paul, this is the first time that I've seen someone asking a obvious question and getting attacked for it.
          The reason for attacking the question has been explained a number of times in this thread. The phrasing of it is inaccurate and misleading, which will usually lead to wrong conclusions.
          Explain to me why wearing down a customer is a good thing?
          I believe you meant to use the word 'prospect' there, rather than 'customer.'

          If you've already decided to buy before you get to the page, which happens more often than a lot of folks might think, it's not hard to find the order link. At least not on any sales page I can ever remember seeing.


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  • Profile picture of the author Desmond Ong
    I'm a student of Corey Rudl internet marketing courses years ago and I remembered one thing he said, never ever put a big price tag in your salespage.

    The reason? By simply hiding price tag in your sales copy, you are forcing the people to actually read your sales copy.

    As most of you already know, sales copy can influenced people to buy stuff. So, by pushing people to read the sales copy, you are pushing people to buy your stuff psychologically.

    I've used this technique and it worked very well.
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    • Profile picture of the author Kay King
      They say it's so they can get their message across first to show the value - they say it works as it builds the excitement - they seem to plan that by the time you see the price, you are chomping at the bit to buy, no matter the cost. I think it's self-delusional to believe you can flog buyers to such a fever pitch that they won't care what the cost is.

      Sellers give their reasons for hiding prices - but then ask why there is so much "shopping cart abandonment".

      It's up to each seller how and where to show his price. My initial response to seeing this practice has not changed over time. My thought then was the seller wasn't convinced himself that his price was a good one for that product.

      I've read posts by sellers who say "it works" - but I'd want to know "compared to what", "does it change the refund numbers", etc.

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  • Profile picture of the author ebizman87
    Because the copwriters know that by the time a prospect finished reading the letter he wouldn't buy the offer if THEY DON'T HIDE the price...
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  • Profile picture of the author Bright Wings
    Well it might be an effective marketing tactic but from my perspective as a buyer it p*sses me off when they hide the price. My first thought is, if they are hiding something as important as the price, what else are they hiding? So it introduces an element of doubt and frustration. It breaks trust that they have been building all through the sales letter.

    So I think it defeats its purpose more times than not. And it feels manipulative. I don't like doing business with people who try to manipulate me. Heck, the "I don't like you" overcomes what I want (your product.)

    I can tell you that I have NEVER bought a single thing from a sales page where they make you click the order button before knowing the price.

    I happen to be a person who values honesty and directness. And I am happy to pay people who give it to me, and withhold from those who don't.

    So am I an outlier on this point? Maybe. But I bet I'm not the only one.

    And whether it works or not? I don't do to my customers what I don't want done to me.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dan C. Rinnert
    Originally Posted by MikeGriffith View Post

    Why is this?
    So they can come on here and post a thread complaining about high shopping cart abandonment rates.

    I like to give the price upfront and weed out the price shoppers, but that's just me.
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  • Profile picture of the author charlesburke
    Nancy nailed it:
    And whether it works or not? I don't do to my customers what I don't want done to me.
    There are those who really do follow the golden rule - "do unto others as you would have them do unto you."

    And then there are those whose rule is just "do unto others." Period.

    As this thread shows, it's not that hard to tell the difference.

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    • Profile picture of the author Raydal
      Originally Posted by charlesburke View Post

      Nancy nailed it:


      There are those who really do follow the golden rule - "do unto others as you would have them do unto you."

      And then there are those whose rule is just "do unto others." Period.

      As this thread shows, it's not that hard to tell the difference.

      Cheers from warm and smiling Thailand,
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      I don't think the golden rule applies here at all. This is not something
      that is "done to anyone" as though it is a trick. I surely didn't tell
      my wife when I first met her that I would like to marry her and
      have four children with her and .... all the rest that go into putting
      up with me as a husband.

      The point is that you want to show value before you quote a price.
      There is no "trick" involved here. It's common sense.

      Everybody "hides the price" whether you want to admit it or not.

      We do this every time we present our "good" side and hide our
      "dark" sides like everyone does on a forum like this.

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  • Profile picture of the author SullyUI
    It's a copywriting technique that may or may not work depending on the product, type of traffic and other factors.
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  • Profile picture of the author Troy_Phillips
    I did this sales page as a test . I basically did the exact opposite of what everyone says to do .

    > No testimonials

    > No screen shots

    > No Graphics

    The page converts like crazy . Now I know you are saying "this is a dollar product ".

    I also tested two more exact pages at different price ranges . One for the dollar . One for $7 , and one for $17. I even started to do a $27 but face it , if you can sell it for a dollar there could be a lot of refunds if you sell it for $27 .

    All the price levels converted well. The $7 dollar one is converting a little better than the dollar one . The $17 one is only 4% below the dollar one .

    And they are all the exact same sales page .

    Check it out here

    Why am I showing you the $1 one . Because someone might actually want the product and we are all warriors here .
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    • Profile picture of the author JohnMcCabe
      Why not take it the extreme?

      Make the price the first thing anyone sees, even before the headline. Anyone willing to test that all the way?
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      • Profile picture of the author Jamie Iaconis
        Originally Posted by JohnMcCabe View Post

        Why not take it the extreme?

        Make the price the first thing anyone sees, even before the headline. Anyone willing to test that all the way?
        Now that you say that...

        One time I had, on the top of the page, that they
        would save $5 or $10 or w/e and it worked alright.

        This might be a way to do it... see, not the actual
        cost, but the amount of the savings!

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      • Profile picture of the author WareTime
        We've had a lot of these "don't trust the man" type posts lately. Marketing is done the way marketing is done, because it works. If putting the price at the top in 72pt type worked, all the long pages would be like that.

        Other recent topics like this.

        Why is the price going up?

        Do sales copy formula turn you off?

        There have been a few others. Basically the formula is as follows. Someone with less than 100 posts says they don't like a tried and true formula, a few other less than 100 posters agree and then some people with 2000+ posts show up and say, that's the way it is, you aren't your market, get on with it.

        Nothing wrong with being new and questioning authority so to speak, but sometimes you just have to realize all the trees lean North because the prevailing winds are out of the South.
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    • Profile picture of the author Raydal
      Originally Posted by Troy_Phillips View Post

      I did this sales page as a test . I basically did the exact opposite of what everyone says to do .

      > No testimonials

      > No screen shots

      > No Graphics

      The page converts like crazy . Now I know you are saying "this is a dollar product ".

      I also tested two more exact pages at different price ranges . One for the dollar . One for $7 , and one for $17. I even started to do a $27 but face it , if you can sell it for a dollar there could be a lot of refunds if you sell it for $27 .

      All the price levels converted well. The $7 dollar one is converting a little better than the dollar one . The $17 one is only 4% below the dollar one .

      And they are all the exact same sales page .

      Check it out here

      Why am I showing you the $1 one . Because someone might actually want the product and we are all warriors here .
      Hi Troy,

      Great tests, but the idea of 'hiding the price' only becomes significant
      at higher price levels. You can get away with breaking a lot of rules
      at the WalMart price levels but not at higher values.

      As I stated before, the lower your price is, you can state the price
      even in the headline, because the price is no longer an objection
      to overcome.

      You'll even realize that for expensive items sold on TV you are asked
      to send for a report, video tape etc,. and that's when you find
      out the price, not in the TV ad itself.

      The higher the price, the more selling you have to do before you
      presenting the price.

      As for those who claim that the scroll to see the price before they
      even read the rest of the letter, price is never an objection if
      you NEED the product. People have creative ways to find the
      money for the things they NEED to get.

      If you are shopping on price alone then you may not be the target
      market anyway.

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      • Profile picture of the author AndrewCavanagh
        There are 2 main reasons:

        # 1: You shouldn't reveal price in a sales letter before first establishing value so they're trying to make sure you've read some of the sales letter before you see the price.


        # 2: In some cases they're testing different prices.

        That's easier to do if you don't talk about the price much in the main sales page.


        Personally I don't think it's going to help all that much.

        If someone is scrolling down your sales letter before reading anything at the top then you really need to work on engaging them more right at the start of your sales letter so they actually read it.

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    I found this is very annoying, too.
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  • Profile picture of the author MADINAZ
    It's to build up and hype the product as much as they can so you think you cant live without it. By the end of the letter you've got that credit card out and price is just not on your mind need is. Then you buy it and that $1000 piece of software just sit's in your hard drive never to be used. Never buy based on hype.
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  • Profile picture of the author LB
    If they ask you to enter your credit card info and then bill it without telling you the price, then maybe there is an issue here.

    Never seen that.

    What I have seen is marketers who have developed a converting sales flow and know what works.

    Build value first and then ask for the sale.

    A bunch of people here are saying "I scroll to the bottom to see the price first"...

    WHY?

    How do you even know if you want what's for sale until you've read the sales page?

    I have cheap dog poop for sale...any takers? I won't even make you read sales copy, but the price is boldly stated!

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    • Profile picture of the author stevenh512
      Originally Posted by LB View Post

      A bunch of people here are saying "I scroll to the bottom to see the price first"...

      WHY?

      How do you even know if you want what's for sale until you've read the sales page?
      I'll tell you why. Because if a product doesn't fit my budget, it's a waste of my time to read the whole sales letter. Like someone else said in this same thread, if a product fits my budget then I'll go back and read the sales letter to see if it's something I can use. If I can't afford it, I can't buy it no matter how good it is (it could end all wars, cure our "addiction" to foreign oil and put a man on Mars.. still wouldn't help me any if it doesn't fit my budget). In that case, why waste my time reading a hyped up sales letter for something that's not going to do me the slightest bit of good?

      Personally if I visit a sales page and can't find the price where I expect it to be (or worse, doesn't list a price at all and makes you click the order button to find out), I don't bother to read a word of it.. I just click the back button. I mean, seriously, would you buy from a store that had no price tags on the merchandise and the only way to find out how much it costs is to ring it up at the register?
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      • Profile picture of the author WareTime
        Originally Posted by stevenh512 View Post

        I mean, seriously, would you buy from a store that had no price tags on the merchandise and the only way to find out how much it costs is to ring it up at the register?
        Amazon.com does this with some items. The last one I saw was a 52 inch LCD television. To find out the price you had to click and while I can't remember if it did in fact add it to your cart, you were a step closer to buying it.

        I do what you do as far as finding out the price first and then reading if I'm still interested. Though I do this more out of curiosity on some of the big lauches we see than a product I'm genuinely searching for. But then I also know, I'm not the typical person I'm trying to sell to.
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        • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
          This thread has just inspired my next article. It's going to start with the line...

          "Okay, students. Let's all get out our tin foil hats..."

          ... or something like that. Sheesh.


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          • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
            Question: Who can tell me the very first manipulative and deceptive sales technique in this thread?

            The first person to get it right, and explain it properly, gets a nice little library of sales training materials.


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            • Profile picture of the author BlueStar
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              Originally Posted by Paul Myers View Post

              Question: Who can tell me the very first manipulative and deceptive sales technique in this thread?

              The first person to get it right, and explain it properly, gets a nice little library of sales training materials.


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              Depending upon your viewpoint, I will say the Original poster.
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              • Profile picture of the author ExRat
                Hi Paul,

                Who can tell me the very first manipulative and deceptive sales technique in this thread?
                I imagine it has something to do with making money from forums/sig file by getting people to 'trust you', 'see you as an expert' and 'clicking on your sig link' - 'how to participate in forums for maximum results.' Stupidly simple, really

                The deception is to appear to be simply asking a question (thus causing others to try and 'help you out'), while in fact you are deliberately stirring up controversy purely for sig file exposure and are not really interested at all in the answers - just the result of the sig file exposure.

                Does it really qualify as deception when the game is blatantly given away?

                As for the library, I'm not sure which one it is but if I'm right with my answer, I already have a fair section of the Myers' library on my hard drive already - I recommend it.
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                • Profile picture of the author Martin Luxton
                  Damn that ExRat, lurking fulltime at the WF ready to be the first to pounce on a competition!

                  I agree it's the OP, but to be more specific the capitalization of the word HIDE in the thread title.

                  "What? The gurus are HIDING something from me? Gotta check this out!!"

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                  • Profile picture of the author Iain Ainsworth
                    Originally Posted by Martin Luxton View Post

                    Damn that ExRat, lurking fulltime at the WF ready to be the first to pounce on a competition!

                    I agree it's the OP, but to be more specific the capitalization of the word HIDE in the thread title.

                    "What? The gurus are HIDING something from me? Gotta check this out!!"

                    Martin

                    I agree it's in the headline the OP uses but not the word HIDE.

                    "Why do they..." implies an us/them 'conspiracy'.

                    Who are 'they'?

                    It's us!
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                • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
                  BlueStar,

                  Not an explanation or a technique, so no.

                  Roger,

                  Excellent explanation of a potentially objectionable technique, but not the one I was looking for.

                  And it's not just my stuff in the library. There's stuff in there from some other folks, too. But thanks for the kind words.


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            • Profile picture of the author Jesus Perez
              It's the person that can't find it that needs the library, Paul!

              Originally Posted by Paul Myers View Post

              Question: Who can tell me the very first manipulative and deceptive sales technique in this thread?

              The first person to get it right, and explain it properly, gets a nice little library of sales training materials.


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              • Profile picture of the author Iain Ainsworth
                Originally Posted by BlueSquares View Post

                It's the person that can't find it that needs the library, Paul!
                True that!

                Trouble is, that's the majority of us...
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                Originally Posted by BlueSquares View Post

                It's the person that can't find it that needs the library, Paul!
                Then the competition should be about the first person who can't find it.

                But it is to him that hath that it shall be given.

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            • Profile picture of the author Kelly Verge
              Originally Posted by Paul Myers View Post

              Question: Who can tell me the very first manipulative and deceptive sales technique in this thread?

              The first person to get it right, and explain it properly, gets a nice little library of sales training materials.


              Paul

              "It's interesting."

              Since the sales letter strategy mentioned in the OP is so widespread that it's not only un-interesting but it's almost expected and since he stated his entire post in the title, that statement is really only meant to pull readers into the thread.
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            • Profile picture of the author JohnMcCabe
              Originally Posted by Paul Myers View Post

              Question: Who can tell me the very first manipulative and deceptive sales technique in this thread?

              The first person to get it right, and explain it properly, gets a nice little library of sales training materials.


              Paul
              It's interesting. Everytime I read one of those hyped-up sales letters I instinctively scroll to the bottom to find out how much the item costs. But it seems they do their best to "hide" the price of their product somewhere in the script.

              Why is this? Is it that they are ashamed of the high price...or that they don't think price is important...or what?? It seems the price would really stand out.
              The premise is that a price that isn't posted in an obvious place is automatically high, and something to be ashamed of. And those nefarious marketers are trying to put one over on the reader.

              It's kind of ironic that if you go to the OP's blog, there's not a price to be found without clicking through to one of those long sales letters... :rolleyes:
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              • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
                Why do they try to HIDE the price in those long sales letters?
                Yes, the first deceptive technique visible to the rest of us was the subject line.

                First, the use of the unfounded assumption, presented as more of an allegation, that someone is hiding something with ill intent. That's the deception.

                The technique was the simple, standard use of a train wreck to draw attention.

                What's interesting is the consistency of the pitch. The guy goes immediately into reinforcing negatives, ("hyped up"), suggests that his aversion to reading is instinctive, and then that the price is "hidden" (implies negative intent) and that the seller is ashamed.

                That's not really the thing I was looking for, but I guess it'll have to do. What I was looking for is that the guy sold himself a lie, before he ever posted this nonsense. He formed an opinion, concocted assumptions to "support" it, and came here looking for affirmation.

                The classic formula for self-delusion.

                However, looking at the analyses of what's visible, I'd have to call it a tie between Roger and Martin. Give me a little bit to get the books all in one zip file, guys, and I'll PM you the link.

                This one will be "Power Copywriting," "The Dealmaker," "Million Dollar Copy," "The Secrets of a 10% Conversion Rate," "Small Changes, Big Profits," and "Marketing ESP."

                I don't *think* either of you have all of those... I'll throw in some other cool stuff, just in case.


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                • Profile picture of the author ExRat
                  Hi Paul,

                  came here looking for affirmation
                  You're on a roll with that one lately I still think the whole thing is focused on sig file exposure, because the sig file and linked site enforces this belief.

                  I think I've only got 1 & 3 so the other four will be awesome - thankyou kindly sir, they WILL be read. I'm just downing a coldie in your honour - cheers!



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                  • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
                    Roger,
                    they WILL be read.
                    Careful about those kinds of statements, dude. There's 600 pages or so in that package.

                    I'm not saying the sig file exposure wasn't a part of it. That's just not the FIRST part, assuming it was a consideration, which isn't established. Or necessarily even a deceptive part.


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                • Profile picture of the author Martin Luxton
                  Originally Posted by Paul Myers View Post

                  However, looking at the analyses of what's visible, I'd have to call it a tie between Roger and Martin. Give me a little bit to get the books all in one zip file, guys, and I'll PM you the link.

                  This one will be "Power Copywriting," "The Dealmaker," "Million Dollar Copy," "The Secrets of a 10% Conversion Rate," "Small Changes, Big Profits," and "Marketing ESP."

                  I don't *think* either of you have all of those... I'll throw in some other cool stuff, just in case.


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                  Thank you kindly, Paul. That's better than a Pulitzer

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                  • Profile picture of the author Karen Blundell
                    how to tell I'm more of a techie/creative type than a marketer?
                    Answer->I hate sleazy marketing tactics and in my humble opinion, hiding the price is sleazy.

                    I don't expect anyone to agree with me...but I never buy from a website that doesn't show the price on the sales page. I consider that tactic deceptive, no matter how successful a tactic it supposedly is.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dave Allen
    Hi Paul,

    The first thing that I noticed is an attempt of the Zeigarnik Effect in the thread title.

    The technique itself is definitely manipulative, but not necessarily bad. What's deceptive is that it was used to lure the reader into the thread, not so much for the discussion itself, but to gain visibility to the sig file.

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  • Profile picture of the author ExRat
    Hi Paul,

    The word hide is capitalised in order to place the most emphasis on it. The title implies that the creators of long sales letters are 'trying to hide' the price.

    The OP then throws in that he is discussing 'hyped-up' sales letters. He then explains how his first instinct is to establish the price. He then switches to saying that they 'seem to do their best to hide the price.'

    So the title is the bait - (states for definite that they 'try to hide' the price) whilst the post itself switches to say that they 'seem to do their best to hide it'.

    Even though he has switched to 'seem', he then switches back to say -

    Why is this? Is it that they are ashamed of the high price...or that they don't think price is important...or what?? It seems the price would really stand out.
    ...again, the implication being that the hiding is planned and deliberate.

    This, coupled with the wording of the sig file text (which suggests that money can be made from posting to forums) continues the emphasis on things being hidden and that money can be earned by deceptive practices. The reader is compelled to investigate the forum method based on the idea that the author of the OP is someone who uncovers these 'hidden money makers.'

    In fact, no sensible reason has been offered as to why they would hide the price and upon closer examination, it becomes obvious that just because the OP expects to find the price at the bottom, and just because it may not be there but the reader might need to actually read some wording to find the price, does not in fact suggest any wrong-doing or 'hiding' of the price at all.

    In other words, just because the price isn't where the OP feels it should be does not mean that anyone is trying to hide it.

    The manipulation is mainly due to the title stating an unproven assumption as an absolute, while the post wavers between this assumption being absolute as well as stating that it 'seems' to be the case.

    So it's a bit like having a newspaper headline that draws readers in by saying that - (EG)

    Your leaders are DECEIVING you

    And then once they read the article itself, the author switches to saying -

    blah....it seems as though your leaders are deceiving you...blah
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  • Profile picture of the author ExRat
    Hi,

    Talking of sig file exposure, some people just visit the forum for 20 minutes, razzing through as many posts as possible, answering the OP without reading the replies - for that reason. Don't they? ^ :rolleyes:
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  • Profile picture of the author tUNU52
    Originally Posted by MikeGriffith View Post

    Why is this? Is it that they are ashamed of the high price...or that they don't think price is important...or what?? It seems the price would really stand out.
    No, they are not ashamed of the high price. They them self may be afraid of high price.
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  • Profile picture of the author jasonl70
    Something that always comes to my mind when I read threads like this:

    A lot of people seem to have problems with transitioning from consumer to marketer, from primarily being a buyer of products, to being a seller of products.

    I also can't help but notice how people always slide in words like 'hype' regarding salesletters, when the topic in this case was how prominent one should display price.

    It's like every discussion of salesletter techniques needs to have negative connotations of unrelated topics slide in under-the-radar, letting the original 'observation' bask in the equiv. of a 'reverse halo effect' of sorts.

    So, all of a sudden, not prominently displaying the price will get painted with the same broad brush stroke of 'unethical marketing' by playing pyschological tricks to associate it with negtive feelings. It's like a psychological bait-and-switch.
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  • Profile picture of the author Isabella Swan
    I do not understand why they have to do this every time? Why they do not just inform us about the prices! We are reading the whole long sales letters taking in mind to find out the price lists. But all we get is a full description of their each and every product and except the price lists. I think it is a way to convince people to buy their product.
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    • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
      Originally Posted by Isabella Swan View Post

      I think it is a way to convince people to buy their product.
      Ya think?

      :rolleyes:
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      • Profile picture of the author Karen Blundell
        Originally Posted by BrianMcLeod View Post

        Ya think?

        :rolleyes:

        I find it ironic how nearly all the female professionals in this thread concur that this sales tactic that the OP posted does not promote honesty and integrity. I also find it ironic that these traits are imperative in building an ever-increasing customer list based on loyality.
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        • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
          Originally Posted by Karen Blundell View Post

          I find it ironic how nearly all the female professionals in this thread concur that this sales tactic that the OP posted does not promote honesty and integrity. I also find it ironic that these traits are imperative in building an ever-increasing customer list based on loyality.
          How is not building up value before showing your price mean you are not displaying honesty and/or integrity?

          Dishonesty would be not showing a price at all... no one is doing that. They simply want to have a chance to show the value of their product before they put a price on it.

          And to those saying "I check to see if it's in my budget first", you are EXACTLY the type of person this tactic is for.

          Anyone can pretty much afford anything. Hell, heroin junkies find new and amazing ways to raise money all the time. People who owe money to mobsters are surprisingly good at raising a LOT of cash in a short time frame.

          The point is that if you want something bad enough, you'll pay anything for it. And as copywriters, it's our job to ensure that as many people as possible see the VALUE in the product BEFORE they instantly make a decision about whether or not it's "worth it".

          "Budgets" have nothing to do with it... it's a simple case of desire vs. resistance.

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          • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
            Karen,

            You have possibly the worst case of "Not my preference means not ethical" that I've ever seen. I really believe you need to give serious thought to the meaning of the words you use.

            The OP's definition of "hiding" the price appears to be, "Not making it screamingly obvious, in great big type, in red, and separated from the rest of the copy in a way that draws your attention away from what's being offered."

            Your objection here seems to dovetail perfectly with your arguments that long copy is somehow evil or nasty. Basically, "Anything that makes me think, or that takes more than 7 seconds, is inconvenient. Anything that's inconvenient is manipulative, rude or sneaky."

            If you don't like it, don't buy it. Easy, yes? Anyone who's been in marketing for more than 6 hours will know that any approach you use will turn off some people. That's a given. If you believe your product will help people, you try to sell the most of it possible. If that means leaving some of the outliers out of the process, so be it.

            I'm going to tell you something you seem not to appreciate: Complaints in a forum thread mean absolutely nothing as far as market research.

            Nothing. At. All.

            They are only evidence of the established fact that people who dislike a thing will be far more likely to speak up about it, and will speak more loudly and often, than those who like it or who don't care either way.

            If you really want to look at the "evidence" in threads like this, look at the opinions of the people who've been at it a while and have some real world experience, and weigh them against the folks who are new.

            That tells a very different story.


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            • Profile picture of the author dclozen
              Paul, this is the first time that I've seen someone asking a obvious question and getting attacked for it.

              I've questioned for a LONG time why do those guys selling products spend at least three or four scrolls telling you how much money you're going to make with their product before they tell you how much their product costs. I get tired of reading all of the charts and crap that they present. I've normally decided long before I even access the website whether I'm going to buy a product and it just irritates me to have to scroll and scroll and scroll through a bunch of crap to get to the purchase button.. This seems to be expected that if you're selling a product or service on the internet you need to go on-=and-on and on about it before you get to sell your product. I'm fairly new at this business...

              Explain to me why wearing down a customer is a good thing?
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            • Profile picture of the author Karen Blundell
              Originally Posted by Paul Myers View Post

              Karen,

              You have possibly the worst case of "Not my preference means not ethical" that I've ever seen. I really believe you need to give serious thought to the meaning of the words you use.

              The OP's definition of "hiding" the price appears to be, "Not making it screamingly obvious, in great big type, in red, and separated from the rest of the copy in a way that draws your attention away from what's being offered."

              Your objection here seems to dovetail perfectly with your arguments that long copy is somehow evil or nasty. Basically, "Anything that makes me think, or that takes more than 7 seconds, is inconvenient. Anything that's inconvenient is manipulative, rude or sneaky."

              If you don't like it, don't buy it. Easy, yes? Anyone who's been in marketing for more than 6 hours will know that any approach you use will turn off some people. That's a given. If you believe your product will help people, you try to sell the most of it possible. If that means leaving some of the outliers out of the process, so be it.

              I'm going to tell you something you seem not to appreciate: Complaints in a forum thread mean absolutely nothing as far as market research.

              Nothing. At. All.

              They are only evidence of the established fact that people who dislike a thing will be far more likely to speak up about it, and will speak more loudly and often, than those who like it or who don't care either way.

              If you really want to look at the "evidence" in threads like this, look at the opinions of the people who've been at it a while and have some real world experience, and weigh them against the folks who are new.

              That tells a very different story.


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              Paul,

              Why do you always have to call me out? I'm entitled to have my opinion and every time I do share my opinion and it differs from yours, you seem to want try make an example of me. Fair enough, you want to make yourself look good and me bad, go for it. I have a thick skin and your words are just that...words.

              Marketers and their split tests make me laugh. Because it's usually other marketers who are doing the testing. :rolleyes:
              If you tested real consumers who aren't marketers, you might get a different response from your split tests.

              In this thread, I'm not the only one who's posted that they dislike having to look for a price. You call us "complainers" so it will make you - the so-called forum "gurus" - good and the rest of us bad.

              So while you are thinking up some kind of lame rebuttal, Paul, I'll go and actually help someone who needs it in the other forums.
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              • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
                Karen,
                Why do you always have to call me out?
                Because you keep preaching uninformed opinion as fact, and that could cost people who don't know any better.
                Marketers and their split tests make me laugh. Because it's usually other marketers who are doing the testing.
                If you tested real consumers who aren't marketers, you might get a different response from your split tests.
                Ummm... You're assuming that the people who are telling their experience only sell to marketers, which is wrong. You also seem to assume that marketers, as a group, are very different from other people in how they make their decisions, which is only partially correct. A small percentage of marketers are cynical of sales approaches because they assume negatives about the people doing the selling.

                If I run a test and it tells me that XYZ technique is ineffective, I assure you that I will believe that test. I will not adjust based on the vocal minority.


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              • Profile picture of the author Tom B
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                Originally Posted by Karen Blundell View Post

                Paul,

                If you tested real consumers who aren't marketers, you might get a different response from your split tests.
                And I always thought that people who purchase items are consumers. Now you tell me marketers are not consumers?

                News flash, marketers are real consumers. Ask some of the multi millionaires on this board.

                So, according to you we can just have a buy now button since most people where going to purchase anyway? Have you tested this for yourself?
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                • Profile picture of the author Tom B
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                  I would bet that if people just had a title and price on a page than there would be complaints about not knowing what it does, how you can use it and so on... lol

                  As marketers, you are focusing on the wrong things. I would rather focus on why the sales page is structured this way. I want to get the largest section of my target audience interested. To do that may mean I need to expand my sales copy to touch all the aspects that my audience needs. If I don't than I won't be maximizing my sales.

                  If I just have the title of my product, text that says "You need this" and a buy now button for $300, I will be lucky to make any sales unless they were referrals.
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                • Profile picture of the author Karen Blundell
                  Originally Posted by Thomas Belknap View Post

                  And I always thought that people who purchase items are consumers. Now you tell me marketers are not consumers?

                  News flash, marketers are real consumers. Ask some of the multi millionaires on this board.

                  So, according to you we can just have a buy now button since most people where going to purchase anyway? Have you tested this for yourself?
                  Thomas..you're right..I totally worded that incorrectly..of course marketers are consumers. What I meant to write was different from what I actually did. I apologize for writing that.

                  Of course there should be a sales page. I think the sales page should list what the product does, what benefits a buyer would get by purchasing it, and a price.
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                  • Profile picture of the author JohnMcCabe
                    Originally Posted by Karen Blundell View Post

                    Thomas..you're right..I totally worded that incorrectly..of course marketers are consumers. What I meant to write was different from what I actually did. I apologize for writing that.

                    Of course there should be a sales page. I think the sales page should list what the product does, what benefits a buyer would get by purchasing it, and a price.
                    To that list, I would add "why the buyer should trust the seller to deliver those benefits"...
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                  • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
                    Karen,
                    I think the sales page should list what the product does, what benefits a buyer would get by purchasing it, and a price.
                    I agree completely. Here's where things get sticky... Benefits are emotional. All benefits, all the time.

                    Failing to fully grasp that is the core reason for the constant debate about long vs short sales copy, "hype," and all the related topics.


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    • Profile picture of the author George Wright
      EDIT: Didn't see your post Brian. I just hit quote reply. I see I'm not the only one with a warped sense of humor.

      Originally Posted by Isabella Swan View Post

      I do not understand why they have to do this every time? Why they do not just inform us about the prices! We are reading the whole long sales letters taking in mind to find out the price lists. But all we get is a full description of their each and every product and except the price lists. I think it is a way to convince people to buy their product.
      do you think?
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  • Profile picture of the author Danny Turner
    For me - I'm less likey to buy if the price is not clear
    If the seller is has to rely on emotion - how real is the value?
    I'm currently working on a IM product mmmmmm I might just put the price in the first paragraph - and if it wasn't digital might add
    " it's a deal, it's a steal, it's the sale of the century, matter of fact the price is so good I'm gunna keep it myself" chuckle (from a good movie)
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  • Profile picture of the author Alfred Shelver
    If the replies here were supposed to be a split test of popular opnion i am very confused... but i personally think if asked most of us would say GIVE ME THE PRICE UPFRONT... but i think buying online is not about logic and thinking and more about emotion and sub concious actions, and therefore having the price not displayed right in the beggining especially with a high price item is by far the best converter.

    Like some one said if we sold our selves to potential Marriage partners by giving our bad side first (cost of the realtionship) i dont think we would make the sale.
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  • Profile picture of the author jasonl70
    Complaints in a forum thread mean absolutely nothing as far as market research.

    Nothing. At. All.
    You, I, and many other people can say this until we are blue in the face - it just does not ever seem to sink in to most people.
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    • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
      Jason,
      You, I, and many other people can say this until we are blue in the face - it just does not ever seem to sink in to most people.
      That's okay. The ones who "get" it make it worth repeating. The ones who don't, well, they'll get what they want: The feeling of being right, without having to make the effort of actually understanding.


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  • Profile picture of the author DougBarger
    Why do people engage in foreplay before moving further?
    Are they evil? Are they hiding their true intentions?

    Why do people introduce themselves first before sharing their life story in a social setting?

    Evidence of trickery or the hand of foul play at work?

    What has 4 legs in the morning, 2 in the afternoon and 3 at sunset?

    I'll tell you the real reason 'they' are hiding the insidious prices buried deep, deep
    within those long salesletters if you can guess my middle name and promise not
    to ask any more questions.

    Deal?

    Mike, all kidding aside, the real reason is to build value, establish credibility, list proofs, benefits,
    reasons why, etc.

    A serendipity for this structure of the successful salesletter is it screens out 'price shoppers'
    who are only looking for the lowest price and attracts more people who are shopping for
    true value instead.

    One of the reasons why is that price shoppers can cause more customer service issues
    which can eat into time and resources while those who buy based on true value
    tend to be easier to work with in many ways.

    Hope this helps,
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  • Profile picture of the author jimh1626
    A sales letter is all about psychology. The location of the price in it is part of the psychology. It irritates me too, but they have to do what they think is best for them to make a sale. So if enough people don't like looking for the price or reading the whole sales letter and sales drop, then the price will be displayed in bold red letters at the top of the sales page if that sells more.

    I think you have to remember that most people aren't as seasoned as most of you.
    The newbie will read the whole sales letter and be injected with emotion and excitement when he or she gets to the price. Sale made. Newbie disappointed. Newbie finds the next great sales letter.

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    • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
      Jim,
      I think you have to remember that most people aren't as seasoned as most of you. The newbie will read the whole sales letter and be injected with emotion and excitement when he or she gets to the price. Sale made. Newbie disappointed. Newbie finds the next great sales letter.
      Oh. My. Dog.

      This is just unbelievably cynical. The suggestion that any letter that sells using long copy is pushing a product that will (not might, but will) disappoint anyone new is not only wrong, it's insulting.

      Yes, Jim, we're all better off with less information, rather than more, before we buy something. Yes, anyone who's interested in selling effectively is also a crook, pushing shoddy products. Yes, we'd allo be better able to sleep at night if we adjusted to your personal preferences.

      The only difference between your argument here and the one Karen made in the last long thread on long copy is that you ascribe the "error" to lack of experience, where she put it down to people being stupid.

      That doesn't change the fact that it's insulting to anyone who disagrees with you, for no reason other than that they disagree with you.
      be injected with emotion and excitement
      Yeah. That's really a bad idea. What they ought to be is jaded and cynical and dismissive. That would be a real improvement...


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      • Profile picture of the author jimh1626
        Originally Posted by Paul Myers View Post

        Jim,Oh. My. Dog.

        This is just unbelievably cynical. The suggestion that any letter that sells using long copy is pushing a product that will (not might, but will) disappoint anyone new is not only wrong, it's insulting.

        Yes, Jim, we're all better off with less information, rather than more, before we buy something. Yes, anyone who's interested in selling effectively is also a crook, pushing shoddy products. Yes, we'd allo be better able to sleep at night if we adjusted to your personal preferences.

        The only difference between your argument here and the one Karen made in the last long thread on long copy is that you ascribe the "error" to lack of experience, where she put it down to people being stupid.

        That doesn't change the fact that it's insulting to anyone who disagrees with you, for no reason other than that they disagree with you.Yeah. That's really a bad idea. What they ought to be is jaded and cynical and dismissive. That would be a real improvement...


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        Paul,

        I didn't say it was a bad thing. You have to get to people's emotions. My point is not that the info is bad. Some is some isn't. The point I was trying to make is that you have to get people pulled in and think that the product is what they need. Most newbies will by this stuff and not do anything with it. Their fault. They will then move on to the next great product.

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  • Profile picture of the author dclozen
    This is something about this business that really BUGS me. I hate havint to hunt for the price of the product. Somehow Internet marketing seems to think that the more you list how much you can make wioth the product "page-after-pate" the more conversions they will make. This even seem to be true for really good products. Several have lost a sale with me. and my affiliation. If I don't have the patience to wade through their sales page. what will a normal customer do... I'll tell you what tyhey do 98% of the time... They hit the little red x in the top right corner of the page
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    • Profile picture of the author JohnMcCabe
      Originally Posted by dclozen View Post

      This is something about this business that really BUGS me. I hate havint to hunt for the price of the product. Somehow Internet marketing seems to think that the more you list how much you can make wioth the product "page-after-pate" the more conversions they will make. This even seem to be true for really good products. Several have lost a sale with me. and my affiliation. If I don't have the patience to wade through their sales page. what will a normal customer do... I'll tell you what tyhey do 98% of the time... They hit the little red x in the top right corner of the page
      Dennis, respectfully, you are not a normal customer. Neither am I.

      Please clarify - are you saying that the only reason anyone would leave a sales page without buying is because the price is in the 'wrong' place? You and I both know better.

      As for marketers hammering a point for page after page, we're back to a matter of execution, rather than basic principle.

      Any of the folks who think the price should be presented up front want to do a test to prove their point? Pick a moderately priced product, whatever that means to you, then test:

      > A sales page with the price as the headline, the product name as the subhead, and a buy button.

      > A sales page with the price prominently displayed above the fold, with the amount of sales copy you think you prefer.

      > A sales page with a proper dual readership path that makes the case for the product in a clear and compelling manner, with the price near the end of the copy, not prominently displayed.

      Measure the time on page, the click-through to the check-out page, the cart abandonment rate, the refund percentage and the overall conversion rate. Post your results.

      And before anyone rebuts by challenging me to do the test, it ain't gonna happen. Your assertion, your burden of proof...

      Absent some credible hard data, all you have is an opinion. While your opinion of what turns you off is perfectly legitimate, you can't legitimately extrapolate that opinion to the general case...
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  • Profile picture of the author Karen Blundell
    Originally Posted by Paul Myers View Post

    Karen,Because you keep preaching uninformed opinion as fact, and that could cost people who don't know any better.Ummm... You're assuming that the people who are telling their experience only sell to marketers, which is wrong. You also seem to assume that marketers, as a group, are very different from other people in how they make their decisions, which is only partially correct. A small percentage of marketers are cynical of sales approaches because they assume negatives about the people doing the selling.

    If I run a test and it tells me that XYZ technique is ineffective, I assure you that I will believe that test. I will not adjust based on the vocal minority.


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    I came across few sales letter like this also, I can't find the price. Once I click "order now" button, I was being directed to paypal and was shocked by the expensive price usually.

    yes, you see Paul, someone else who experiences frustration when they can't find a price!

    If you read my posts again, Paul, I said in the first one, "in my humble opinion".

    I don't think my opinions are uninformed nor are they fact. They are just my opinions. But they must bother you. You seem to like to insult me by calling me uniformed. I'm more informed then you know. You don't even know me at all, Paul, and that's too bad, because I'm not a bad person, nor am I stupid. We could even be friends if you weren't bent on making me look bad!

    In my humble opinion, the bottom line is this: if marketers want to continue to hide prices in their marketing materials, then they should be aware that they are more than likely losing some customers.
    I guess you can't please everyone, can you?
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    • Profile picture of the author jasonl70
      I'd say if some one is actually interested in buying a procuct, and the price ends up being acceptable to them, then they are not going to have a problem if the price was 1 click away.

      Originally Posted by Karen Blundell View Post

      In my humble opinion, the bottom line is this: if marketers want to continue to hide prices in their marketing materials, then they should be aware that they are more than likely losing some customers.
      I guess you can't please everyone, can you?
      OK - but if you gain 2 customers for every 1 you lose, then I would be more then happy to lose the 1.

      Also, I'd say that the 'sale lost' in the example you quoted was not even a potential sale in the first place. They had an issue with the price (sticker shock) - that issue would not magicly disappear if the price had been on the first page.

      This person was not a potential customer, and surely most people would agree it would be foolish for any business to decide they should cater to the non-buyers.

      Does Mercedes worry about what Kia buyers think about their marketing? Does Ford worry about what the Prius market thinks about their newst F150 marketing? I doubt it...
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      • Profile picture of the author Karen Blundell
        Originally Posted by jasonl70 View Post

        I'd say if some one is actually interested in buying a procuct, and the price ends up being acceptable to them, then they are not going to have a problem if the price was 1 click away.



        OK - but if you gain 2 customers for every 1 you lose, then I would be more then happy to lose the 1.

        Also, I'd say that the 'sale lost' in the example you quoted was not even a potential sale in the first place. They had an issue with the price (sticker shock) - that issue would not magicly disappear if the price had been on the first page.

        This person was not a potential customer, and surely most people would agree it would be foolish for any business to decide they should cater to the non-buyers.

        Does Mercedes worry about what Kia buyers think about their marketing? Does Ford worry about what the Prius market thinks about their newst F150 marketing? I doubt it...

        One thing I've learned throughout my life is to never, ever judge a book by it's cover. And don't assume that a potential buyer who visits your site and doesn't buy, wasn't a buyer to begin with. You don't know that for sure, do you?

        here's a scenario for you: a woman walks into a car dealership. She is wearing jeans, a t-shirt, no makeup, and her hair has all kinds of flyaway wisps. She looks dirt poor. But she goes up to the top of the line car, and says to the sales agent: "I would like to take this one for a road test." Now the guy rolls his eyes and looks at the other sales person and you know what they are thinking.

        But he takes her for the test drive and when they come back, she says, please proceed with the sale. The sales agent looks at the other guy and again you can see it in their eyes, what they are thinking. So the sales guy brings out the financing papers. And then the woman says, very calmly "I'll be paying by certified cheque, so we don't need those papers."

        Just like the "Susan Boyle" story..never ever assume anything, because you'll make an a** of yourself every single time
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      • Profile picture of the author Fabian Tan
        Originally Posted by jasonl70 View Post

        Does Mercedes worry about what Kia buyers think about their marketing? Does Ford worry about what the Prius market thinks about their newst F150 marketing? I doubt it...
        I agree, worrying about all the people who complain is not healthy.

        A fair way to look at it is that some people may not like the direct marketing style.

        Right now, if you probably try hard enough, you will find people complaining about McDonalds and Coca Cola online, two of the most valuable brands in the world. And let's not pretend that everyone likes those 2 companies. Health advocates are probably typing out some rant on the Internet somewhere as we speak. The serial complainers will find a way to complain, somehow, some way.

        Forget the whiners and the complainers, your time is far better focused on your key customers who will stick with you for the long run.

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        • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
          Scott,
          If I've decided your product is something I absolutely need after the first three paragraphs of your letter, why don't you have a button there for me to buy it immediately?
          Specious argument. There is nothing preventing someone from grabbing the mouse and scrolling to the order button/link in a matter of seconds. Or are you suggesting that some significant number of people don't know how to do that?


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          • Profile picture of the author Halifax
            Originally Posted by Paul Myers View Post

            Scott,Specious argument. There is nothing preventing someone from grabbing the mouse and scrolling to the order button/link in a matter of seconds. Or are you suggesting that some significant number of people don't know how to do that?


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            Fair enough, Paul.

            I do prefer the letters with the CTA in multiple places within the letter, but there is nothing to prevent me from scrolling down to the bottom to find the order button and... no price!

            Well, maybe it's something I'd buy for $500, but not for $5000. Now I need to try to search the rest of the letter for the price. Let's see, I'll search on "$" and that should... Uh oh. Nope. Lots of places where "$" is used to tell me how much Joe Guru made and how much I could make and how much I'm going to save, but after clicking the "Find Next" button 34 times I still haven't run into the price. Maybe they put it in as a graphic so I can't search on it. Or maybe they didn't put it in the letter at all.

            OK, I'll bite and blindly click the "Order Now" button... UGH! No price here either. But I do have to fill out a form with my complete name, mailing address, telephone number, e-mail, etc, etc. And all of the fields are required. Is this an e-product, or a physical product? That wasn't really obvious from the 1/20th of the sales letter that I had time to read. Why do they need all my personal info? And why isn't there a little lock icon indicating that I'm on a secure site? I'm outta here!


            Yeah, it's happened that way for me. More than once, actually. I've even run into some where I filled out my personal info and the next page was an upsell that still hasn't told me the price on anything! Now I've submitted my personal info and I haven't even purchased anything or even found out the price. I've also run into a couple that required that I enter my credit card info and told me right there that the "total price, including shipping" would be displayed on the NEXT page where I could confirm my order.

            I know that the mile-long sales letter with the price either well hidden or missing is a bit of a sacred cow to many internet marketers. It was tested ages ago and it's worked very well in the past. I also know that I used to be able to make pretty decent money selling self-published books through classified ads in newspapers and that doesn't work any more. I'm saying that I simply don't have time to read the huge sales letters any more and hiding the price annoys me. Maybe someone needs to step back from the "everybody knows it works best" model of a decade ago and try something new that's geared more toward the information overload situation of today.

            Maybe it's just me and the fact that I got burned badly on a "hidden price" IM purchase that came to $10K several years ago, but I find my "scam alert" light flashing bright red when I can't find the price easily in a sales letter and that makes me start to view everything else in the letter through a fairly strict hype filter.


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            • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
              Scott,

              I'll definitely go along with that objection. Under no circumstances would I give anyone any information in response to a salesletter without knowing the price.

              It's very likely that I would forever ignore anything from anyone who did that.


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              • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
                Scott,
                Maybe someone needs to step back from the "everybody knows it works best" model of a decade ago and try something new that's geared more toward the information overload situation of today.
                I have. The prospects were marketers. The only way it works well for me is when it's my subscribers or people from this forum, both of which groups know who I am and what my info is like. For people outside my "usual circle," long copy still works better for me.

                That's hardly a universal thing, and it depends on the product and price, as well as any pre-selling that may have been done, but it does show that there's still a lot of truth to the traditional approach.


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  • Profile picture of the author Bright Wings
    There are a couple of ideas in this thread that I want to comment further on.

    1) What to do when you have customers for whom the product isn't in the current budget -- but they still want it. (Answer: provide additional payment options? Extend the offer? Take it away but let the buyers know it will be back? Give an option to "hold" the product for a certain length of time? Kind of like layaway sales?) Maybe we could get a little more creative with these things, especially if the ONLY reason for not buying is "not now".

    2) Taking a long sales letter to build value. If there IS no value, no length of promo copy is going to create that. Sure, you can create illusions. But when the pile grows too high it starts to smell bad -- even for people who don't know better. The point I want to make is that if there really is value in the product or service, good copy will reveal it -- and not have to hide what's not there (lack of value.) Trying to create an illusion of value when there isn't much, is what most people understand as "hype" -- and find objectionable.

    Yes I understand switching hats from a buyer to a producer/seller. I just never forget where I came from, and how it feels on the other side of the desk. It generally serves me well. When you're marketing a product or service, you really do have to "wear a different hat" -- but I think it's a terrible idea to leave your empathy behind. You forget the buyer's needs at your own peril!

    I hear some talk about why "black hat" isn't such a bad thing -- but that depends on what you value most: a 1-time sale or a lifelong customer. I know which one I'd rather have.
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  • Profile picture of the author elitepostings
    Sales pages always try to undermine the price with large letters around "main points" to make a "larger point" out of those. Implying that the points outweigh the price.
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    • Profile picture of the author Paul Myers
      Karen,

      Saying that your opinions on a specific topic are uninformed is very different from saying that you are generally uninformed. And I don't think you're stupid. I think you have a common mistake in your thinking, which is to assume that the majority of people think the same way you do.
      if marketers
      want to continue to hide prices
      For purposes of clarity, please define "hide." I understand the word to mean something that doesn't fit with the way I usually see prices displayed.
      they should be aware that they are more than likely losing *some* customers. I guess you can't please everyone, can you?
      Bingo.

      Any approach will lose some customers. As I have said here some large number of times, trying to please everyone is a sucker's bet.

      The question is, which way do they lose more customers? That's been answered repeatedly in this thread by folks who actually write and test and track sales copy for a living. Generally speaking (there is no hard and fast rule on it), you will lose more by drawing attention to the price before you establish the associated value.

      Please note that I am making a distinction here between hiding a thing and not aggressively drawing attention to it.

      The exceptions are commodities, the value of which people are assumed to already understand. That's the difference between groceries (the usual counter-example) and the sort of products for which long form sales copy is typically used.
      yes, you see Paul, someone else who experiences frustration when they can't find a price!
      Ummm... He specifically mentioned that his concern was a "shocking" high price, not any extreme frustration at being unable to find it, which he clearly knows how to do.

      I did not say, at any point, that there aren't people who are annoyed by it. I said, among other things, that there's nothing sleazy, deceptive or otherwise unethical about not pointing out the price before you've explained the value offered.


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  • Profile picture of the author Halifax
    If it's an info-marketing product, then I think burying the price is counter-productive. IMers all know about mile-long sales letters and we simply don't have the time to wade through them. I've bailed on several IM sales pages when I couldn't find the price easily. Maybe the seller can comfort themselves by thinking that losing a sale to me is made up by making sales to others, but who's to say that making it easier to find the price wouldn't result in more sales?

    Maybe the tactic still works better than anything else in non-IM markets. Maybe not. It's one of those "everybody knows" things that was tested thoroughly decades ago. Of course that was before people were hit by massive information overload and their attention became so fragmented that they barely have time to read anything longer than a Post-It(tm) note any more.

    If it's going to be a long sales letter, then I prefer it be one that has the call to action multiple times within the letter. If I've decided your product is something I absolutely need after the first three paragraphs of your letter, why don't you have a button there for me to buy it immediately? "No, no, no, Mr. Customer, you can't buy it yet because I'm not done selling it and I'm not going to tell you the price!" A good salesperson knows that when the customer asks to buy, you take their money instead of dragging them through another hour of sales presentations and possibly alienating them.


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