Need a good description for my blog guys can help me

by Devilfish168

Posted: 10 years ago 5 replies

INTERNET MARKETING

my present blog description is "How to Make Money on the Internet Create Alternative Income"

any ways to improve , I want to give an impression to visitors , I not selling but is we together buy these products I stated to earn good money on the internet.

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art72 10 years ago

Personally, I would leave the entire "Make Money Online" out of the equation. While it may express one benefit the visitor may be seeking, there are better (*more persuasive) words that can effectively differentiate you from the million others proclaiming the "Holy Grail" solution to Making Money Online!

Honestly, it immediately turns me off seeing those words used, and could essential offset "What Are You Really Offering Me?"

Maybe you have "Traffic Strategies... or You're an Experienced Copwriter sharing insights on "How to Explode Your Website Traffic" -or- maybe Your skills are in web design, SEO, Article Syndication... using the broad term "Make Money Online" in my opinion is an overly used, and often exaggerated expression to lead off with...

Be more creative and craft something that may lead to your visitors making money online, but I'd steer clear of such a widely used, and abused use of words.
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- honestim 10 years ago
  
  Hi,
  
  I will try not to give you a specific answers as the information required for that is not available. The best suggestion I would give is think about the benefits that money would bring to people. Money could mean freedom to some, luxury to others, peace of mind to many and survival for a few. These are the end results that must be brought out in the blog description. If you are able to match the meaning of money to the visitor coming in you have cash register ringing. This is exactly why it is so very important to know your visitors well.
  
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  Devilfish168 10 years ago
  
  this is what I feel too...I feel my description is too narrow and simple..will turn visitors off.
  
  that why seek fellow WR members help
  can come out a description for my blog
  
  I want to make visitors feel I not trying to sell products.
  I trying to share my ideas to all.
  
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art72

10 years ago

Simple.

Answer the ole W.I.I.F.M. (What's in it for me?) question... from the perspective of your audience.

Naturally, you want to teach them something and that something appears to be "How to Make Money Online?"

But, you can shift your focus to 'declare' the benefits of your 'specific methods' and let visitors know what they can expect? What are they getting? Why should they learn from You? What makes you different than the million others 'pushing training'?

In a nutshell, hit your audiences 'trigger' points, connect with them in a way they feel you have something they want or need.

Be clear and concise, no hyped up bs.

Your one stop shop for learning internet marketing..." -or- "Pass this Test and Succeed Online" -or- "Your Online Source for Internet Marketing Secrets"

Obviously, these were just thrown out there, but find something that strikes your audiences attention, and stand true to that promise!