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Need advice on squeeze page PLEASE!

by willisk
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Hello Warriors,

As I read this forum more and more the #1 response I see to building an income online is building a list. And this week I will be starting with my process!

I have completely set up my sales funnel and would like to hear any tips to improve my squeeze page to improve my opt-in rate.

Please take a look at my squeeze page.


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I appreciate all advice! Thank you in advance.
#advice #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author davidg93
    Hey, just my 2ct as a newbie myself.

    a) "Enter your email below" and in the email-box you write "Enter your name". This is confusing.

    b) "All you need... [...] an action plan [...]" That sounds that I need even more than this blueprint. This sounds like more work than I want to do. I would take this phrase out and only write "All you need is this Free Blueprint and the Will to Succeed". The actionplan is in this phrase (will to succeed = actionplan)
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  • Profile picture of the author Dave37
    There is an important mistake you will need to correct.
    Although above the box, it's said "Enter your email address"but inside the box (which is more emphasized), it's written "Enter your name".
    This will create confusion.

    Besides, the look is simple and nice.
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    • Profile picture of the author willisk
      Thank Guys! I have fixed both issues!

      I appreciate the feedback!
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      Looking for smokin' HOT buyer traffic? Broadcast your special offer to over 40,000 of my highly responsive subscribers | Buyers list included

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