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Critique My PreLaunch Page Please

by SeanSupplee
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Hey Warriors,
Been doing a ton of reading butterfly marketing etc. before launch of my project I have worked months on. I am trying out the whole build excitement before launch and that your prelaunch is actually the most important step. Please look over Secret Traffic Reports
The job here is to get people interested without giving away to much on what the site is about to build curiosity. Ideas, additions, suggestions?

Thanks!
#critique #page #prelaunch
  • Profile picture of the author Muhammad Hassan
    Looks professional.

    There's not what's in it for me message on it. It does tell the visitor what benefits they will get for giving there name and email - benefits of the product, benefits of being on prelaunch list.

    The benefits must be put on the page or in the email or on the page that directs visitors to it.
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  • Profile picture of the author ebizman87
    It'd be nice if you add more credibility by showing any traffic stats that your system really works
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    Is this for real?
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  • Profile picture of the author tessmac9708
    In Honesty, you're not going to get much excitement going with this page.

    In fact the way it is I'd be amazed if anyone would enter their details.

    You need to give a teaser, a video, a reason...

    Graham
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  • Profile picture of the author SeanSupplee
    Hey Jon, Not sure why the page is loading slow the server is based in the USA will take a look into it.

    Thanks Mahammad going to add in some more details of the benefits of joining the list early.
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  • Profile picture of the author Desmond Ong
    I think a video will be more than enough.

    I'm actually building my first butterfly marketing site right now too. lol. what a coincidence.
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