Meet "Mookie", The Hard-Working Fly! (Video Critique + How To Put Pause, Play, Stop Buttons?)

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Hey Guys

I have my KingdomPLR launch coming up on 12th June 2009.
I have created a pre-launch video - to be released on 3rd June 2009

The video is almost ready from my end. Please check it and let me know your feedback. If you feel any change is required, do let me know.

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Also, i need to add pause, stop, play buttons as well as the slider. How do i add that?

Any help would be greatly appreciated!



Regards
Abhi
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  • i really like the character you created.so cute, and i think the message is very understandble. i dont have a problem with the graphics, and colors are very attractive.
    good work there,but there's just one thing i don't like. The voice seemed like hes whispering to a microphone, inside a cave... it sounds funny. But that could just be me.
    I am actually excited to see the revelation on the 12th.
    goodluck!
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    • Hey Hangtimenino

      Thanks. Glad you liked it

      The voice has been done by a very popular voice-over expert, and a fellow Warrior. Personally i am quite happy with it. But i might be biased.

      If you listen through a set of headphones, probably it might sound a bit clearer? I use headphones myself!

      And any idea how can i put pause, stop and play buttons on the video?

      -Abhi
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  • You put pause, stop and play buttons on the video by using
    a player that contains them in the first place.

    And... I'm with Onslaught... the concept of your video character
    was kinda cute but the pace of the video is very tedious. I couldn't
    watch it all the way through.

    Tsnyder
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    • Hi Tsnyder

      Thank you for your feedback.

      The only reason it is a bit long is because i had to show how much effort most people put in the wrong direction. They keep on trying without much results.

      If i make it shorter, i guess it would lose the impact.

      But Let me see if i can make this video shorter, without defeating the purpose of the video.

      I would have the video on the page itself (the way you just saw it). How do i put the buttons here?

      Regards
      Abhi
  • Hi,

    I thought the video was great.
    Did you make that yourself or outsource it?
    I really liked the cartoon, can you pm me on how it was done,
    it would be greatly appreciated.

    Thanks

    Scott Allan
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    • Hi Scott

      Glad you liked the video. I hired someone in my city to make the video for me

      Regards
      Abhi
  • The character was cute but I agree that the video seemed pretty long. Even before the character (of the fly) was introduced, I was ready to go. Get to the story quicker. Three people here (including myself) have already said they wouldn't watch all the way through if given a choice. Even with the voiceover you can edit it down to a shorter duration. Are you selling self-help or motivational PLR products?
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    • Hi Cynthia

      Yes, i am trying to make it shorter without defeating the purpose of the video.
      Yes, I have self-help and motivational PLRs as well

      - Abhi
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