What is your first reaction when you hit this page?

by LMC
8 replies
Hey Guys,

Looking for a quick review of my new design to one of our upcoming projects... Nothing works yet, just a design and links.

Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

GoParkit - Domain Name Sophistication
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  • Profile picture of the author landing-page-dude
    The design is clean and layout is good. However your value proposition is a little hard to understand. I don't know if the copy on the site is what you are launching with, but if so you'll get more interest if you are more specific on the benefits of what your product/service has to offer.

    For example: you say "Unique back end administration" well what does that mean, whats unique about it, how will it help the customer.

    I think a little more focus on the specific benefits the product will offer the customer would be good.

    Just my thoughts...take them or leave them

    It's a good design though...clean and crisp.
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  • Profile picture of the author Elliott
    What is it? What does it do? What do I do with it? How can I use it? What good will it do me?

    Elliott
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  • Profile picture of the author Matt Gannon
    First thing I though was it looks professional, Next was what is domain sophistication, then after reading down the page a bit more my next thought was, great idea!
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  • Profile picture of the author Aronya
    Appealing design, but the purple in the one image doesn't work for me. I'd lose the dashboard screenshot in your rotating image window & use the individual "bullets" one by one, rather than grouping them. It should be "Built to make YOUR life easier".

    I'd be interested in knowing more about what you're doing.
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  • Profile picture of the author ShellySamuel
    nice and clean design- Really with good backend for your clients. It looks very professional.
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  • Profile picture of the author Germanakos
    Originally Posted by LMC View Post

    Hey Guys,

    Looking for a quick review of my new design to one of our upcoming projects... Nothing works yet, just a design and links.

    Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

    GoParkit - Domain Name Sophistication
    I really like the design. Looks professional. the dark outide background makes you focus on the center where the main body is.

    I won't comment on conversion or anything else because you said it's just a design.
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  • Profile picture of the author GeorgR.
    my first reaction:

    Go Park it - Its DEAD.

    That's what the black border implies.
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