Please Review My Website

by antis
12 replies
So, first of all, I know that my design sucks. I haven't spent much time on it yet, so I will adjust it in the future. Furthermore, not all pages are finished yet.

The things that i want you to check is my about page and my only blog post. I've always had difficulties creating blog posts for not knowing how to do it correctly, and not being a native English speaker.

Be brutal, and tell every little detail that needs to be corrected.

Remote Starters For Cars

Btw, that is my first website and first written content ever.
#review #website
  • Profile picture of the author DWolfe
    First off you need content on your welcome page. The site lacks color. good job on building it. Make sure you show pictures of cars buried in snow or ice so you can show the benefits of a remote starter.

    I wont be brutal since you have taken the initial leap. Good luck. after this past Winter a lot of people will be considering remotes in the North East & Mid West parts of the US
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  • Profile picture of the author Marketeranas
    I would like to see some good quality content on it before i can judge it .

    Create a quality welcome page ! As far as About page is concern it is good just need some keywords to be shown in bold !

    Put more effort on it and then ask every one to put up a broad review on it ! Hope it helps
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Tandan
    Your about page has the right elements but I'd just re-order them. When I look at an about page the 1st thing I want to see is info on the site creator. So simply, put your 'purpose' section first, followed by 'what's unusual', then lastly the info on 'what would happen'.
    Personally I really enjoy the blog post.

    Great start in my mind. Keep at it!
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    • Profile picture of the author seoboyz01
      Hi,
      Make header bit colorful. Don't left it black and white.
      Optimize the site loading time. It should load more faster.
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      • Profile picture of the author antis
        Originally Posted by seoboyz01 View Post

        Hi,
        Make header bit colorful. Don't left it black and white.
        Optimize the site loading time. It should load more faster.
        Yes, the header is awful... I probably need to get a professional logo
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    • Profile picture of the author antis
      Originally Posted by Mark Tandan View Post

      Your about page has the right elements but I'd just re-order them. When I look at an about page the 1st thing I want to see is info on the site creator. So simply, put your 'purpose' section first, followed by 'what's unusual', then lastly the info on 'what would happen'.
      Personally I really enjoy the blog post.

      Great start in my mind. Keep at it!
      Thanks Mark!
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  • Profile picture of the author antis
    Yes, I know, there is not enough content yet. But I want you all just to review my about page and a blog post. Just to see what can I improve.
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  • Profile picture of the author antis
    Do I need to include any photos in about page, or any facts about myself?
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  • Profile picture of the author aaaa33030
    The blog page looks good and the 1 blog post has the average amount of content needed to be considered a blog post.

    The background for the about me page is a little too dark
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