Do you think this will convert well?

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Three goals are:

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Any constructive criticism would be great guys and gals, this is all made from scratch in photoshop with some stock imagery:

I will be adding to this tonight, I plan on continuing the 3D look at the bottom with shipping reassurances as well as security seals and credibility boosters.

Have a great night everyone!

-Ryan
#convert #cta #landing page
  • Profile picture of the author CDarklock
    That word should be "personnel".
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    "The Golden Town is the Golden Town no longer. They have sold their pillars for brass and their temples for money, they have made coins out of their golden doors. It is become a dark town full of trouble, there is no ease in its streets, beauty has left it and the old songs are gone." - Lord Dunsany, The Messengers
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  • Profile picture of the author rawservices
    I know its fixed in the updated version.
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  • Profile picture of the author iMarketing Cafe
    Good graphics, reasons for buying, simple opt-in...

    I think it will do fine.

    To Your Success
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  • Profile picture of the author Shane Hale
    Very nice graphics just fix the spelling error it should make a nice conversion rate.
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    • Profile picture of the author astevn816
      Originally Posted by Shane Hale View Post

      Very nice graphics just fix the spelling error it should make a nice conversion rate.
      A nice display, should convert well.
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      • Profile picture of the author JamesFarias
        I think the presentation LOOKS phenomenal (in fact I am subscribing to this thread so I can find you in the future if I ever need an artist) and I would definitely be interested to learn how it converts. Personally I find it a bit confusing though...are you trying to sell me something or give me a free report?

        Usually you see something like a free report enticing people sign up and THEN you rope them in with your product sale in that report. I am afraid you might scare some potential signups away with the 399 price tag.
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  • Profile picture of the author rawservices
    Thank you, this is my first time developing a site to make sales lol.
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  • Profile picture of the author Eric Transue
    Looks good Ryan! I would definitely split test to see if you can improve the conversion rate once you have it up and receiving traffic. It would be interesting to see if you get more opt-ins by having the opt-in box towards the top of the page. You'll never know until you test. Best of luck to you.
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  • Profile picture of the author rawservices
    @James thats an excellent point,

    I need to make it less confusing I know, I just got excited about all the benefits.

    I'll take off the price tag until I warm them up a bit.

    The whole idea behind this page was to first get them to a landing page:

    tennis
    chiropractors
    weight lifters
    etc.

    Warm them up then send them to this page. But I see what your saying

    @Eric

    Thank you, I will be split testing once I get it all setup. I'll post and let you guys know what works best.
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  • Profile picture of the author rawservices
    What does everyone think about putting pricing on the web?

    I feel as though you can weed out your looky loos v.s. real buyers, if they want to learn more after they see the price then they are more apt to buy.

    I dunno, I've never really sold a product online, I'm just trying to use what I've learned from this forum and reading constantly.

    Any Help?
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