What is your opinion about my opt-in page?

by artkho
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Hi,

I would appreciate any of your feedback and opinion on my new opt-in page as well as domain name.

How To Make Your Brain Work For You

Thank you all in advance!

Artkho.
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  • Profile picture of the author AmericanMuscleTA
    Nicely designed. Nice domain name.

    Instead of "abundance" I would use something more specific. Attract wealth, money, time, friends, sexy ladies, etc.
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    • Profile picture of the author thedog
      It's a little busy, the bg graphic doesn't make the headline or text clear. Your headline especially really needs to pop.

      I'd also put the bg content color as white.
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    • Profile picture of the author onSubie
      Originally Posted by AmericanMuscleTA View Post

      Nicely designed. Nice domain name.

      Instead of "abundance" I would use something more specific. Attract wealth, money, time, friends, sexy ladies, etc.
      I was going to make the same observation. There isn't a clear enough problem/solution or feature/benefit.

      Especially the headline - make my brain work for me how?

      I thought the page looked a bit busy with the detailed graphic and transparent form. At firstI thought it might appeal to 'brainiacs' but then I realized that is not your target market.

      You should try split-testing with a less cluttered looking opt-in form as well as this one.
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  • Profile picture of the author Gambino
    I like the design. Not a huge fan of the headline "how to make your brain work for you". It works for me. I think and do things all the time. How will this ebook improve my brain or it's performance. Also, not a fan of "enter your best email here" instead do just "email address" or something that says "where should we send your free report?" It kind of makes me question why you want my "best" email. Nit picky, but that's my thoughts. Not enough to attract me personally.
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  • Profile picture of the author JCorp
    Looks good... The image background shows up through the main squeeze where the text is... so you might want to lighten it up a bit, make it smaller or move it just a tad so the main area is a bit more clear.
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  • Profile picture of the author JonathanB
    Hi, I'm not an expert, I don't know if this is what you're looking for, but as soon as I opened the page I was overwhelmed (maybe too much colors?) Also, the top right circle graphic kind of made me think twice. Maybe try a white or cream background for a softer touch?
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  • Profile picture of the author artkho
    Wow! I highly appreciate all of your feedback, that's truly helpful and a lot of food for thought! Thank you so much for your suggestions.

    I share some of your suggestions (e.g. headline, problem/solution, some of design stuff) and will test those one at a time to see the changes in conversion. However, I should say the page has been converting really well so far - very high opt-in rate for the two solo ads I had.

    Anyways, guys thanks again to all of you! :-)

    P.S. BTW any recommendations for high-quality but reasonable (price) solo ad providers in particularly a personal development niche? Thank you.
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  • Profile picture of the author actionplanbiz
    i suggest to switch the "3 Mind Power Secrets To Attract Anything You Want!" with your main headline.
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  • Profile picture of the author Declan O Flaherty
    I would change the black background. It doesn't pop and takes away from the copy. Headline is weak also.

    Headline: FREE Content Packed Report Reveals the Secret Mind Power Techniques You Can Instantly Start Using To Attract Anything You Want Into Your Life

    Sub Head: YOU Can Quickly And Easily.... yada yada yada

    Another thing. In the make money online niche/market it may be fine to ask for just an email but, in the self help/personal development market you will most definitely get a higher response on the back-end if you get the persons name too.

    My two cents.

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