Someone reviewed my ebook (it's not done yet, I just sent them the pdf), and they liked it. But they said that I use a lot of run on sentences, and bad punctuation. And they gave me some examples. I saw what he meant, but really I don't think it's such a big deal. My book is written in a very conversational style and I think that the most important thing is that you get your message across clearly. I think he's being unnecessarily pedantic. He's an editor, that's probably why.
My writing is good and yes I do sometimes bend some rules I guess, but who cares? It's not like I make spelling mistakes or say their when I mean they're, or anything like that. I tried to write like I talk, and I see nothing wrong with that.
What do you think?