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Need a professional look on my website!

by webseohub
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Hi everyone,

First of all i will introduce myself, my name is Jannick and i'm new on this forum. I found a lot of good information on this forum before so i decided to sign up.

I started creating websites for a hobby like 6 months ago and i still like to do. Ofcourse i would also like to make some money of it so i decided to create a membership website.

My website isn't finished but i would love to get a professional look on my website. I know there are a lot of succesfull internet marketeers on this forum and i would love to get some feedback to improve my membership website.

My own ideas are:
Creating upsells / different levels in this membership
Adding more walkthroughs
Make the more user friendly, (but how?)


Please before you reply make sure you don't try to insult me but try to help me.

my website is: Money Making Walkthroughs Money Making Walkthrough
#feedback #professional #review #website
  • Profile picture of the author positivenegative
    Hi Yannick,

    I guess the following tells us everything . . .

    Originally Posted by webseohub View Post

    I started creating websites for a hobby like 6 months ago
    Originally Posted by webseohub View Post

    My website isn't finished
    Yet you're an "expert" in money making . . .

    Originally Posted by webseohub View Post

    my website is: Money Making Walkthroughs Money Making Walkthrough
    login on: www.moneymakingwalkthrough.com/wp-login.php
    username: jannicktest
    password: jannicktest
    You see, the problem is that real money making experts don't come on WF asking for advice, because real money making experts are far too busy making it. And if you're really "that good" then I'm sure you wouldn't need to be asking for opinions on your website . . . as you'd have a top team designing and monitoring it for you, wouldn't you?

    Come back Yannick when you've made your millions, and please tell us how it's done!
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    • Profile picture of the author webseohub
      Originally Posted by positivenegative View Post


      Come back Yannick when you've made your millions, and please tell us how it's done!
      I'll be back!
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    • Profile picture of the author Wealthyclark
      Originally Posted by positivenegative View Post

      You see, the problem is that real money making experts don't come on WF asking for advice, because real money making experts are far too busy making it.
      I think I understand what you're getting at but this statement couldn't be further from the truth. Even experts need advice or assistance sometimes, being an expert does not mean you know everything. IMHO

      Wishing you much success,
      WealthyClark
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  • Profile picture of the author amuro
    Originally Posted by webseohub View Post

    Hi everyone,

    First of all i will introduce myself, my name is Jannick and i'm new on this forum. I found a lot of good information on this forum before so i decided to sign up.

    I started creating websites for a hobby like 6 months ago and i still like to do. Ofcourse i would also like to make some money of it so i decided to create a membership website.

    My website isn't finished but i would love to get a professional look on my website. I know there are a lot of succesfull internet marketeers on this forum and i would love to get some feedback to improve my membership website.

    My own ideas are:
    Creating upsells / different levels in this membership
    Adding more walkthroughs
    Make the more user friendly, (but how?)


    Please before you reply make sure you don't try to insult me but try to help me.

    my website is: Money Making Walkthroughs Money Making Walkthrough
    login on: www.moneymakingwalkthrough.com/wp-login.php
    username: jannicktest
    password: jannicktest

    Hey Jannick,

    That's a great looking site you have here.

    Even better than mine.

    I don't think you need any more professional outlook.

    What you need to work on your content aka copywriting.

    You need to make it very clear especially in your headline and sub-headline.

    1. What is your site about?

    2. Who is your product for?

    3. And what benefits do visitors get if they were to buy from you?

    4. Last but not least, why SHOULD they buy from you rather than your competitors?

    If you can answer all these 4 questions and conveyed very clearly and precisely in your headlines, sub-headlines and content, you won the hearts of your visitors.

    Even if they do not buy immediately but will eventually if you can get them to optin your list.

    PS There are many ways to make money online. You don't need to know or list all the ways but some of the essential ways.

    Like list building, email marketing and product creation.
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    • Profile picture of the author webseohub
      hi,

      thanks for your reply!

      i will definitely work on that!

      you mean that i don't have to list up all the video's what are included in the members area?
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  • Profile picture of the author ecoverartist
    Your squeeze page isn't bad at all...but I would change the red font to something more legible, and the dark gray for testimonial names is also difficult to read. My biggest question when going to your site are... who are these internet marketing masters? Are they people I've heard of? If not, why should I trust them? What have they done that would make me want to listen to them?

    Some good questions to ask yourself as you work on attracting your best customers
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  • Profile picture of the author serryjw
    You are saying you are an expert making full time income...YOU have to show some proof of income and your previous successes or it doesn't sound credible.
    I would change the background to white with color accents.
    Good Luck,
    Serry
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  • Profile picture of the author Assignmentwriter
    You website design is fine i suggest you to participate here Website Design
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