Especially looking for constructive criticism.
Let me tell you some of the things that concern me.
1. It might just be me bit it seems there's a lot of white space between the headline, subhead, and video/optin box.
2. I think the video might be too small. I'm thinking about expanding it and shrinking the opt in box.
3. Has anyone ever used a graphic to link to a separate page with an optin box. I was thinking about used a graphic and some text that would link to a different page where I could have a video that details the benefits of joining my list as well as the opt in box.