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Hello Warriors,

I'm working on a mini site for a client and have two Header concepts that I created, I was looking to get more than just a designers point of view on this.

If any warriors could, let me know what looks best or what you would like changed.

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  • Profile picture of the author adam123
    Hey Earl,

    I think the first is better but the text "killer workout" is not enough "eye popping" and the buttons are a bit oldstyle.

    Have a nice day,
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  • Profile picture of the author Harry Behrens
    I would definitely go with the first one, the second one is way too busy and hard to read. If you want to improve the second one definitely take out the birds (are those birds?) in the background.

    Both of them need the "Killer Workout" part of the headline to be a lot more pronounced.
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Drinkwater
    First one for me... much clearer
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    • Profile picture of the author Liam Hamer
      The first one, by far. It's very eye catching and easy to understand.
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      • Profile picture of the author WritingMadwoman
        I like the first one too, easier to read and a really nice 6-pack shot on the model...LOL (why did none of the guys mention that as a plus?? )

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        • Profile picture of the author Liam Hamer
          The tabs on the bottom of the first one are very well laid out too, and will really capture people's interest - particularly the 'save 40%' one and the social networking site ones.
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          • Profile picture of the author Cyrus
            First one is better... but make it a small..
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  • Profile picture of the author Pisaka
    The first one is far better but you should improve the readability of some points or just change the print, but it's still OK and catch the eye!
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  • Profile picture of the author spoink101
    Yeah, the first one is better! but try to choose a brighter text font for the "killer workouts"..
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  • Profile picture of the author Marc Jager
    First one, no doubt.
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  • Profile picture of the author Earl Smith
    Thanks for all your opinions Warriors. I will take those pointers into consideration, it looks like header 1 is the winner.
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  • Profile picture of the author ken_p
    from a consumer point of view, i am more drawn to the first one. the second looks too gothic for an average joe, its a but scary.lol
    hope i helped
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  • Profile picture of the author macD231
    Image looks good but the name killer workouts doesn't go with the it.Need to change the image or write something that goes with the image.
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  • Profile picture of the author Earl Smith
    How bout these changes something simple for the average joe.

    Thanks for the help warriors I love getting all your opinions, it helps me step out of my box to make my style more versatile.

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    • Profile picture of the author Liam Hamer
      Originally Posted by Earl Smith View Post

      How bout these changes something simple for the average joe.

      Thanks for the help warriors I love getting all your opinions, it helps me step out of my box to make my style more versatile.

      Looks fantastic, the only slight criticism is that the "I really like your approach" part might not be easy to read for some people.
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  • Profile picture of the author adam123
    cool, have you tried adding 1px red or yellow stroke to the headline? IMO it makes the headline more outstanding and eye catching
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  • Profile picture of the author Earl Smith
    Thanks adam123 I'll give that a try
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  • Profile picture of the author Pisaka
    To my opinion you should try to write KILLER WORKOUTS in orange or bright yellow, but not red to call for attantion, otherwise the upper and lower lines merge and you loose eye-popping effect.
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  • Profile picture of the author peter gibson
    First one FTW.
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    • Profile picture of the author Philipc
      The first one is easier to read. Less clutter.
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