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Feedback on my first sales page!

by Unbreak
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Hello, this will be my first post as a member of this awesome community. First of all, I'm happy to find this forum, because I've learnt in my short time here.

Please forgive my grammar, english isn't my main language, but I'm trying to do my best.

I'm trying to improve my marketing tehniques using different ways to promote. I want to start promoting an email submit offer via social media. This is what I've done so far. I would love to hear some feedback!

#feedback #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Randall Magwood
    I have no idea of what you're selling. What are you selling? Are you selling a gas card, or is it some kind of MLM program? I think it needs a re-design and should immediately let the reader know what it's all about - starting with your headline. I still don't know what to make of it. And what do you get out of them "claiming" a $1,000 gas card?
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  • Profile picture of the author jfalxr
    Originally Posted by Unbreak View Post

    Hello, this will be my first post as a member of this awesome community. First of all, I'm happy to find this forum, because I've learnt in my short time here.

    Please forgive my grammar, english isn't my main language, but I'm trying to do my best.

    I'm trying to improve my marketing tehniques using different ways to promote. I want to start promoting an email submit offer via social media. This is what I've done so far. I would love to hear some feedback!
    Hey, unbreak..
    Welcome..

    Where is your sales page???

    What social media are you using to promote?? Social media can surely brings a lot of free traffic if you have targeted followers, even some of them may be a cold traffic
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  • Profile picture of the author alvinhy
    The graphics are very distracting.
    Not sure why you aligned the three paragraphcs like that.

    Maybe having them one under another at full width would do better.

    The button to "claim gas card" should be standing out way more than blending into the background.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jeffery Moss
    Is your website for some type of survey/gift site? Those type of sites seem to be very popular now. As for the content of your page, it seems to be very good. Someone might be enticed by what you're saying to click through, assuming they wanted to learn more about getting a free gift card.
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