Looking for tips on how to improve salespage

by pjmc84
6 replies
Hello Warriors,

I've just gotten my product website added to the clickbank marketplace and was wondering how I can possibly improve the overall structure/look to increase my conversion rate (selling an anxiety/panic attack product for $37 a piece).

The sales page is up at stopanxietyinminutes . com

Looking for any constructive feedback/criticism on how to improve the look, please be very blunt and honest (I can take it!)

If anyone is interested in promoting my product, feel free to contact me.

Thanks everyone.
#improve #salespage #tips
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  • Profile picture of the author Michael J Ottman
    I am not great at copy but sure can help you with a new book cover. I will even do it for free. Although your sales copy is important, the cover makes me think this product is outdated since there are way better graphics out there.

    I'm not looking for money from you, I really think I should give you a free cover to help this along. You in?

    Michael J Ottman
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  • Profile picture of the author winebuddy
    Hi - you will get absolutely tons of suggestions from this forum.

    Here's mine...

    The page looks kindof "cartoonish" if you know what I mean. And YES - the ebook cover looks like a 15 year old did it - it doesn;t look like a real book.

    pay someone to make you a cover that looks like a real book.

    Personally - I think almost all of the copy is too large - not comfortable for liesurely reading... you're trying to make me PANIC! :-)

    Just my 2 cents worth
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    • Profile picture of the author pjmc84
      Thanks guys! Now I feel like swallowing a knife! yay!

      Just kidding.. I greatly appreciate the honest feedback, I really needed the wake up call. I am going to consider re-writing the entire sales copy (will probably do this all day tomorrow).

      Michael, I will definitely take you up on your ebook cover offer.. as I could use a fresh look in that department.

      Please let me know how we can proceed with this (I will pay you for your work btw!)

      Thanks
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      • Profile picture of the author R.T.Bucher
        Looks a little too busy for me.... Maybe too much bold

        Not sure about the headline.

        How bout...

        "Probably the Fastest Technique Proven to End Panic Attacks
        Using A Recently Discovered Secret Chinese Therapy"

        Just my 2 cents
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