What intrigues you...more

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"Make money online Quickly"

Or

"Learn about the concept of how to make money online"




Just brainstorming for a brandname... and need your help
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  • Profile picture of the author LouiGeeinMD
    "Learn about the concept of how to make money online", the second one.


    Originally Posted by priyankeshu View Post

    "Make money online Quickly"

    Or

    "Learn about the concept of how to make money online"




    Just brainstorming for a brandname... and need your help
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  • Profile picture of the author The Niche Man
    Make Money Online Quickly!

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  • Profile picture of the author crums1371
    I would be more likely to go for "Make Money Online Quickly". Just my 2 cents!
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  • Profile picture of the author elusian
    The first one. The second is about theory. Theory is nice but it simply does not grab people. Making money quickly so that you can pay the bills is what will hit people harder.

    Are these possible headlines or are you just asking for our opinion?
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  • Profile picture of the author Gambino
    First one sounds like a scam. Second one doesn't make me want to buy anything either. I'd continue brainstorming.

    Not much info in the original post but I wouldn't consider either one of these "brand names". Product names, perhaps.
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    No one wants to 'learn' something. One of the first rules of copywriting is to never use the word 'learn'... instead use the word 'discover'. Most people associate learning with hard work and most people are afraid of hard work.

    Sad but true.
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  • Profile picture of the author Sarevok
    Consider your end user demographic.

    What do they really want?

    Do they want to "learn", or do they want massive results without doing much work?

    Odds are... Your end users want results... FAST.

    Convey that to them, and make them imagine what's possible.

    Just my $.02.
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    • Profile picture of the author holleythompson
      the second one is better. the first one looks and sounds spammy.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rick Rodd
    Originally Posted by priyankeshu View Post

    "Make money online Quickly"

    Or

    "Learn about the concept of how to make money online"




    Just brainstorming for a brandname... and need your help
    Or, you could combine the two: Learn how I made money online the quick way. It engages the potential buyer to act upon your claim while having them stay tuned with your product.
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  • Profile picture of the author laurencewins
    Neither. Make money online sounds like a scam or they want money upfront.
    The second one is too vague. You want a title that is direct...and honest. Lying doesn't get you anywhere these days.
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  • Profile picture of the author rbates
    As has been said, the MMO quickly sounds a bit "Scammy".

    How many people that are trying to Make Money Online have
    all of the "Concepts" (usually rotting away on their hard drives),
    but either don't do anything with these ideas, or they simply
    are unable to grasp the concepts and make things work?

    That said, I'm not sure how this is helping with a brand name...
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  • Neither one sounds appealing to me. If you re-worded the second sentence I may be enticed to buy that one.
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