I Just Launched a New Site - Can You Guys Help Analyze

Just my personal opinion, but overall I would clean up the site some.

It just feels too busy. Like CLICK HERE no CLICK HERE no no CLICK HERE CLICK HERE.

I would go for a cleaner set up that is easier for the reader to follow.

That is just my two cents.

Good luck

Rebtl

Also, you may want to reconsider the top and bottom banner placement. At least make them as wide as the body and make them fit into the theme of the site. It looks like they are just floating there with no meaning or significance.

I also believe that the site is a little too busy but the asthetics are what is throwing me off.

Here my take:

I see too many choices, as in too many links. It's hard to find out rather your site is for me (the reader) or someone else.

If a person is confused they will go elsewhere. If they only have one choice they are more likely to choose yes. Who are you trying to reach and what would make them feel comfortable with giving you their email address?

It's good to have the sign up for your newsletter immediately on the left. List your primary featured product under it. Not a series of products.

An intro at the top is fine, summing up the purpose of your site, but there are too many links. I don't know where to go.
I would want your 'featured article/info' immediately following your intro.

A nav bar could offer links to other content categories, then I choose what I'm interested in then go to that page. One each of those pages you could 'feature' an affiliate product or your own.

You could widen the right column so it is easier to read the content without scrolling down. It's good to have the signup at the bottom. You could lose the extra link and make that box shorter.

Are all the links to the same program?

In terms of shape, colors, background it looks fine. Much better than some sites I've seen. But there are just too many links.

Hope this helps. Good luck.
And congrats on doing something to get started, a lot of people buy, read and study and never do anything.

Thank you all for your advice. Am yet to learn HTLM, but preparing towards that.

#1 the subscription opt-in box should not be hidden at the bottom of a looong page; you should put it at the top

#2 top banner looks like an advertisement, not linked to the actual site-- you should alighn the banner edges with the rest of the website to make them match up.

#3 those little icons on the second banner aren't clear-- what does an arrow pointing up and an email envelope mean in this context?

Just way to busy for me.

Are you selling one system or many.

Remember you have 5 seconds at best to give me a reason to stay on your site. I really didn't know what to do when I got there.

You have to bring some focus to the page. I am looking for something that will pull my eyes and start to tell me what this is about. I never found it.

I think you have to manny links in the copy at the beginning also

Look pretty nice. But waaayy to many links. It seems like this page is about more than one program. It would be nicer to focus it on one thing only and tale away all these flashy banners