Can I get some reviews on a web site?

Hi Charlie,

Here is the link for others that wish to comment:

What Are Hemroids|Hemroids Look Like|What Causes Hemroids

Am guessing that you asked because you want the truth.

Sorry, but the website is not good!

If it doesn't look professional people either won't hang around long enough to read what you say or, if they do, won't trust what you say. If I came across a website like this in any niche I would hit the back button within about a microsecond.

Would suggest that you install Wordpress and pick good looking template. You can then focus on the content without having to worry about the appearance.

Current site will never convert.

Really sorry but it has to be said.

Andy

My review is that I would turn it into a blog, which would center the text and allow you to get your affiliate products up above the fold (in the side bar).

I agree looks like a cheap advertisement

What a pain in the ass it must be to promote! (Sorry I could not resist the pun)

Here are a few ways to clean it up:

1. Get a nice graphic header with a "Hero" shot (the doc is good but it's blurry, go to stockxpert.com and get a good shot for $1)

2. Use stylized sales page template (plenty around) with all the CSS set for you for continuity (just google "sales page templates free")

3. There is no real flow to the text and the design is sending the eyeballs all over the place. Think of it like a story, beginning, middle and end... work on that premise.

4. From an SEO perspective make the site more expansive, have an articles section targeting the phrases you want to go after. Maybe add a blog (outsource the posting if you don't want to do it) and use these traffic funnels to promote the products you are selling.

5. Build a newsletter, work with the traffic you do get and give them a reason to solve there problem and continue to market to them.

There are lots of ways you can acheive this. Just install a simple wordpress blog and get a free theme from anywhere online (there are some good sales page these in the WSO section occasionally) and work from there.

You really can create cookie-cutter websites with wordpress to use in any niche you want and just adapt the graphics and content to suit. Heck, you could even hire someone to set design it for you once with that in mind and then duplicate it for every promotion you want to target.

One final thing, don't take the criticism personally. These points are laid out to help you and increase your sales. You did the one thing that many people don't do, you took action and that says a lot!

Hope that helps and good luck with your promotion.

Sean

Hey Charlie,

Man I didn't know you could order Hemorrhoid Creme from Amazon! lol

Ok here is what I would do Charlie, Like previous people mentioned here. I would create a blog out of it using Wordpress as the CMS Engine. Then I would go to DIYThemes and purchase the Thesis Theme, change the background of course and then put your information into blog posts. Use relevant keywords in the posts for SEO purposes...

If you are concerned about ranking in the search engines, I would also go ahead and created articles and submit them to major article submission services. I would say create some videos but lol that may get a little hard to do? If there is a will there is a way though. Make sure you point links back to your hemorrhoid site. I think you are looking for the throw the site up quick and get sales, but in todays market you are going to have to put forth a little more effort to get revenue from your site...

To Your Success,
Clint Anderson

Ouch.

First of all, your site needs to be visually soothing to the visitors that you are targeting.

The thing I remember most is the bold red text: hemroids hurt! which is the total opposite of soothing.

Next you have some links to pictures of hemorrhoids, which are not soothing at all... I wanted to click away but I stuck with it to give an honest review.

If I were looking for a cure for the roids, I would feel much more comfortable at a site that does not aggravate the problem, but soothes and provides a nice pain free solution.

No need to remind people that it hurts, focus more on feeling no pain & curing the problem.

P.S.

Google Results 1 - 10 of about 488,000 for hemroids
Google Results 1 - 10 of about 3,050,000 for hemorrhoids

Chaz,

I won't go into your site design it seems that you've got enough feedback in that direction but you also mentioned you had trouble getting organic traffic. Here's a free ebook from a guy with a great reputation that you might want to read "77 Ways To Get Traffic".

I hope it helps!

Nigel