Need Feedback for a Public Speaking Workshop Title

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I need feedback. I am planning a workshop for public speaking and the title is: "Complete Speaker Makeover". What do you guys think about the title? Thanks for the feedback
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  • Profile picture of the author Odahh
    who are you targeting and are you just planning to do workshops for public speakers or use the workshop to take on clients to coach to be better speaker or improve their incomes as speakers .
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    • Profile picture of the author Claude Whitacre
      Originally Posted by Odahh View Post

      who are you targeting and are you just planning to do workshops for public speakers or use the workshop to take on clients to coach to be better speaker or improve their incomes as speakers .
      Yup.

      What are they learning in the workshop?

      The bad thing about "Makeover" is that it doesn't convey a benefit.

      Is the workshop to...

      Become a better presenter?
      Get more clients?
      Sell more from the front of the room?
      Deal with booking agents and event planners?
      Improve your visuals?

      You need to give a specific benefit that they want, in the title.

      What experience an expertise is brought to the table? That would help to know.
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      • Profile picture of the author Odahh
        Originally Posted by Claude Whitacre View Post

        Yup.

        What are they learning in the workshop?

        The bad thing about "Makeover" is that it doesn't convey a benefit.

        Is the workshop to...

        Become a better presenter?
        Get more clients?
        Sell more from the front of the room?
        Deal with booking agents and event planners?
        Improve your visuals?

        You need to give a specific benefit that they want, in the title.

        What experience an expertise is brought to the table? That would help to know.
        being a digital marketing forum and being 2019 ..if i was going to be a public speaker or looking to grow my income as a public speaker.. i would be looking for ways to use you tube and or other social media ..to either add to my income or get more speaking gigs ..or what ever you call them ..or doing podcasts to promote your business..

        the wide range of options available today ..
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  • Profile picture of the author Jonathan 2.0
    Originally Posted by Cris Dawal View Post

    I need feedback. I am planning a workshop for public speaking and the title is: "Complete Speaker Makeover". What do you guys think about the title? Thanks for the feedback
    Yeah I think you need to provide more info. As a general title what about: "Public Speaking Made Simple ... And ... Easy." Just a quick thought.
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