I am getting married!

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Hello fellow Warriors,

I am not sure if this is the right section but I really need your help. My wedding is fast approaching and our wedding organizers informed me to prepare an English vow for my future wife.

Here's what I have written and please do some necessary corrections and suggestions.

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You are God’s precious gift to me, my springtime, my hope and my joy.

You are everything that’s pure and true. And I adore you with my mind, body and soul.

How blessed I am to be able to say that you are mine, to be able to love and cherish you for the rest of my days.

I vow to always be there, to comfort you in your sorrow, and rejoice with you in your victories.

I promise to love you all my life with all my heart.

I pledge to be there when you need me, to fill your days with sunshine, to comfort and encourage you, to be your never-ending best friend, and to love you all my life, with all my heart, for so long as we both shall live.

I will trust and honor you, I will laugh and cry with you.

I will love you faithfully, through the best and the worst, through the difficult and the easy.

What may come I will always be there. As I have given you my hand to hold, so I give you my life to keep.

May our hearts and every breath become one as we unite this day as husband and wife!

I swear to be your true love from this day forward and forevermore.

God will be the foundation of our marriage.

I love you so much Mylene, my precious wife, best friend and overall partner.

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Personally, I am so excited and quite nervous as well. Your help will be very much appreciated. You can add something if you like and I will truly admire it.

What do you think of the grammar?

Thanks a lot!

Cheers,
Louie Tugas

P.S. I just added these two lines:


I can’t guarantee that there will be no problems but I can promise that we are going to face them together.

There’s no way that we won’t argue in some occasions but this simply shows that our brains our working in order to have the best solution.

What do you think my fellow warriors?
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  • Profile picture of the author Deidra Renee
    The only thing I would suggest is take out *over all partner* You could just say *My wife, my best friend* and end it there..

    Anyway, Congrats!
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    • Profile picture of the author MaxBounty
      Originally Posted by Deidra Renee View Post

      The only thing I would suggest is take out *over all partner* You could just say *My wife, my best friend* and end it there..

      Anyway, Congrats!
      I agree with Deidra about removing "overall partner".

      Congratutions!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Firenetworkblog
    Congrat dude
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  • Profile picture of the author OriginalEXE
    Congratulations on your wedding
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  • Profile picture of the author danlew
    Congrats Louie and wish you luck on the wedding! I hope you will be very happy on that day with your bride.
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    • Profile picture of the author Pamellalovely
      Congratulations for your wedding Louie. You have take a very right decision. I hope you will enjoy your life...
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  • Profile picture of the author warriorjeterboy
    Is this your first time? just joking.. Congrats kabayan and best wishes..
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    • Profile picture of the author Shilpa
      Congrats and my best wishes to you and your "precious wife".. Enjoy!!
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  • Profile picture of the author uniquecontentclub
    Congrats! And real cool that you came here for help!
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    • Profile picture of the author Andrew Skelly
      big step...and a new exciting chapter in your life.
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  • Profile picture of the author webchris
    Congrats Louie! Very thoughtfull vows.
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  • Profile picture of the author carolf
    beautiful vows

    I am getting married in May woooooooo hooooooooooooo
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert Kim
    Congrats Louie! Very meaningful, well written vow.
    Good luck for your upcoming life.
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  • Profile picture of the author williamstraus
    Awesomeness! Enjoy your new life and especially the bachelor party the night before ;-)
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  • Profile picture of the author Minna_Bryant
    Louie, this is so awesome and congratulations on your pending nuptials.

    The only thing I might change is
    How blessed I am to be able to say that you are mine, to be able to love and cherish you for the rest of my days.
    to "How blessed I am to be able to say that you allow me to love and cherish you for the rest of my days."

    Otherwise, your words are beautiful and heartfelt.
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  • Profile picture of the author ProScribe
    Congratulations, best of luck with your future bride

    "God will be the foundation our marriage."

    should read

    "God will be the foundation of our marriage"
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  • Profile picture of the author sandy christine1
    Congratulations. Have a happily married life. Stay blessed.
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  • Profile picture of the author JoeDRL
    Congrats!
    It's a really good and emotional text, I really like it.

    I wish you two the best of happiness!

    ~JoeDRL
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  • Profile picture of the author Waxdk
    Congratulations
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  • Profile picture of the author perfectlovehere
    Congratulations! Make sure to always remember to be kind to her. Women are emotional creatures and no matter who you marry she will have moments where she will be difficult. Remember that you chose her for better or worse and take care of her.
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  • Profile picture of the author magiclouie
    Thanks a lot fellow warriors for all your best wishes, inputs, and suggestions.

    I will be applying them.

    You guys and gals really rock!
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