27th Apr 2012, 01:32 PM
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| I think I'm getting there War Room Member  Join Date: 2005 Location: West Midlands, United Kingdom.
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    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ePx...e_gdata_player Basically I can create this video with a 100 different keyword titles so the customer can rank for the search term. I approached the customer yesterday and today one of the guys at work told me that his best friend is manager of another Estate Agents. Should I go with the first or the second potential customer? Thanks everyone Brian Posted from Warrior Forum Reader for Android |
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28th Apr 2012, 11:02 AM
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I'm sorry but you have to make the text on the images better ...it's not visible at all like you made it. ( Not a really good video )
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28th Apr 2012, 11:11 AM
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28th Apr 2012, 01:20 PM
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try making it around 600+ bit rate.. would be clearer..  |
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28th Apr 2012, 01:40 PM
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Hey the demo is good but the ghost effect between slides is not good. change it. otherwise it is good. text should also be improved.go for the second customer.
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28th Apr 2012, 01:47 PM
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I'm watching from a PC, and the overlay text needs to be improved! The color is not right, and the placement is wrong, especially in the last scene.
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29th Apr 2012, 03:11 AM
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Some helpful advice, Green is seldom a good color on video and especially if there is any Green in the picture. The font face should be bolder and use a small drop shadow to enhance readability also be more aware of your message placement. Your transitions would be better served with a straight wipe or short dissolve since the purpose of the video is to impart a message not to wow the viewer with effects. I hope this helps |
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29th Apr 2012, 11:23 AM
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Good suggestions from above. Transitions definitely need to be changed.
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29th Apr 2012, 01:42 PM
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This may sound harsh, but you need to here it: that video is utterly horrible. If you approached me with that trying to sell it to me, I would not be very receptive. Please go find a After Effect template file to suit your needs. 20 After Effects Template Websites |
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30th Apr 2012, 11:48 AM
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I totally agree with most of the above observations. It seems you've got the right idea and are have the basics down pat but there is no doubt there are lots of kinks that need to be worked out before you move forward.
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30th Apr 2012, 12:16 PM
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Love the idea Brian, yes there's a few tweaks you can make but you're on the right track man!
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30th Apr 2012, 12:33 PM
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With all of the great comments & advice I've received, I'm tweaking the software to make the text and transitions better than they are now. If it's okay to do so I will post version two tonight. Cheers everyone. I appreciate the help that is only taking me forward. Brian |
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