Is this press release good, opinions needed

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Social networks have defined ths new generation , from the myspace revolution to facebook and twitter. Social networks have been the new way to meet people, share ideas, and promote your buisness. As time has past more and more new social networks have come out , now making it hard to keep track. Each social network whether its twitter , facebook ,pintrest ,etc has thier own app for the android phone. Now if you use 5-6 of these social networks that means downloading a ton of apps just to have easy access to them all. This is where the application Ultimate Social Networking App comes into play.

Ultimate Social Networking App from PixelPower combines all these social networking sites into one application on your android device. You can seamlessly be one twitter on one moment , then jump to facebook with a press of the button. Best of all the Ultimate Social Networking App is free for your android devices and works with tablets too.

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  • Profile picture of the author CoachManny
    Where is the press release?

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    • Profile picture of the author DebbieB
      If that's your press release then you need a rethink. It's not what would be considered a press release at all.

      Your question is hard to answer in any case. Is it good for what? It would depend a lot on what your plans for the press release are, who the intended audience is, etc.

      So rethink what you have so far and then perhaps try again for more feedback.
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  • Profile picture of the author naturaldry
    Also what are you really using that press release for? To reach your audience or SEO?
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    • Profile picture of the author krenisis
      Well the press release is more than this but this is the body of the press release. I wanted to introduce an application I made, and tell people

      1) What my application does

      2) What separates it from other applications

      3) Why my application can benefit them

      I answered all those questions in my press release, so the feedback is what questions I havent answered I need to know.
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  • Profile picture of the author Tom Miles
    Hi Krenisis!
    Nice description of your product. I gotta tell you though, you need to recheck your spelling and punctuation. The way it is now is very unprofessional.
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    • Profile picture of the author krenisis
      Originally Posted by tj@marketeem View Post

      Hi Krenisis!
      Nice description of your product. I gotta tell you though, you need to recheck your spelling and punctuation. The way it is now is very unprofessional.
      Thanks thats the type of feedback I need , the how to improve feedback thank you.
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    • Profile picture of the author James Woods
      Originally Posted by Tom Miles View Post

      Hi Krenisis!
      Nice description of your product. I gotta tell you though, you need to recheck your spelling and punctuation. The way it is now is very unprofessional.
      I agree with Tom you definitely need to rethink your punctuation. Also when you create your press release treat it like a WSO and lead with the benefits dont worry to much about the details. Remember its all about whats in if for the consumer.

      With regard to punctuation have you had a look at grammarly. Its down the bottom of the link page
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      • Profile picture of the author ShutupAndEarn
        Originally Posted by James Woods View Post

        I agree with Tom you definitely need to rethink your punctuation. Also when you create your press release treat it like a WSO and lead with the benefits dont worry to much about the details. Remember its all about whats in if for the consumer.

        With regard to punctuation have you had a look at grammarly. Its down the bottom of the link page
        FYI your affiliate link does not work to grammarly.
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  • Profile picture of the author Bot Products
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    The URL is broken. You may want to update the link.
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  • Profile picture of the author ViralMediaBoost
    I can already access the link. Aside from grammar and spelling issues, be careful with proper capitalization. Twitter and Facebook should be capitalized because they are proper nouns.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rus Sells
    The last thing that is, is a press release.
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