Fellow Warriors, I'm a newby, need your help with site development.

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I have started developing this site (in my signature) and would like your honest review. Please be brutally honest. But do be honest. Also, I am open to any suggestions you have to promoting it.
#belly fat #diet #lose fat #lose weight permanently #weight loss
  • Profile picture of the author thunderbird
    I see that the meta is all good. Well done for a newbie effort. That said, the contents of the article is problematic for me. It jumps from overly vague explanations for beginners to a specific regimen which would only be coherent to someone with more advanced knowledge.
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    Project HERE.

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    • Profile picture of the author cricketguy
      Thank you thunderbird for your quick review. can you elaborate a bit more on what you mean by 'meta'. I totally agree with you about the content. So I re-wrote the article. Hopefully I addressed the problems with it.
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      • Profile picture of the author thunderbird
        Originally Posted by cricketguy View Post

        Thank you thunderbird for your quick review. can you elaborate a bit more on what you mean by 'meta'. <snip>
        Meta is basically the text that search engines see, placed in the head section of sites before the main body. It is often invisible to the human eye.

        From Google Meta SEO Inspector Plugin
        META
        WARNING head title too long (>65 chrs)
        head title : Do Lose Weight Permanently - Home ( 67 chrs )
        description : How do i lose weight and gain the muscle that I want. Online Weight Loss Community. ( 83 chrs )
        keywords : ab exercises, abdominal fat, belly fat, bottled drinks, breakfast, canola oil, cardio, diet, diet soda, exercise programs, fat, fat loss secrets, flat belly, healthy fat-burning, lose weight, protein, six pack abs, sleep, weight loss, weight loss programs ( 20 items )
        og:site_name : Do Lose Weight Permanently
        og:title : Do Lose Weight Permanently
        og:description : How do i lose weight and gain the muscle that I want. Online Weight Loss Community.
        og:image : http://doloseweight.weebly.com/uploa...52814_orig.jpg
        og:image : http://doloseweight.weebly.com/uploa...51212_orig.jpg
        og:url : ********************* * * * * * * Do Lose Weight Permanently - Home
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        nofollow (1)
        SCRIPT
        Google Analytics | Official Website (2)
        cdn1.editmysite.com (5)
        Commission Junction (2)
        widgets.twimg.com
        dls25.hopfeed.com
        edge.quantserve.com
        HTML
        iframe (2)
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        Project HERE.

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        • Profile picture of the author cricketguy
          Thanks for the help thunderbird.
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  • Profile picture of the author hifrend
    your site need meta tags to have good rank on search engine
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  • Profile picture of the author cricketguy
    come on people let me know what you think I am doing wrong here.
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