Which headline do you like better?

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I'm trying to choose between these two headlines for a drop card if you don't know what they are it's a great offline marketing tool that looks like a $100 bill but when you open it, It has your marketing message.

Anyway which headline do you like better for an attention grabber

1. Are you getting paid what you're worth?

2. Tired of being over worked and under paid?

I haven't crafted a full message yet but the card like always will have my personal number my website and my recorded call.

Which one do you like better or if you can come with a similar one please feel free to share it.
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  • Profile picture of the author AffiliateBeast
    I think 2nd one is better. It has a more personal feel into it.
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  • Profile picture of the author savidge4
    only 2 options? I would be A/B testing that and passing on gut feeling and allow actual clicks to make the determination.


    Originally Posted by Fitnessfreak158 View Post

    I'm trying to choose between these two headlines for a drop card if you don't know what they are it's a great offline marketing tool that looks like a $100 bill but when you open it, It has your marketing message.

    Anyway which headline do you like better for an attention grabber

    1. Are you getting paid what you're worth?

    2. Tired of being over worked and under paid?

    I haven't crafted a full message yet but the card like always will have my personal number my website and my recorded call.

    Which one do you like better or if you can come with a similar one please feel free to share it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Melrock
    Tired of being over worked and under paid? Though if I got something that looked like $100 bill in the mail I'm not sure I would open it.
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  • Drop cards are tough to test and track because the market is not targeted at all. There are much more effective ways to advertise.

    If you are going to use this tactic, don't just drop them everywhere be tactful about it. Place them in books and magazines relating to your topic. Success magazine, entrepreneur books etc. This will at least get them in front of people who are looking for a home business of some sort.

    Also a good headline to use from drop cards is #1 Home Business.

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  • Profile picture of the author bagful
    1st one looks decent. because it has direct/postive words such as paid, worth rather than underpaid, over worked.
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  • Profile picture of the author Remodels
    Originally Posted by Fitnessfreak158 View Post

    I'm trying to choose between these two headlines for a drop card if you don't know what they are it's a great offline marketing tool that looks like a $100 bill but when you open it, It has your marketing message.

    Anyway which headline do you like better for an attention grabber

    1. Are you getting paid what you're worth?

    2. Tired of being over worked and under paid?

    I haven't crafted a full message yet but the card like always will have my personal number my website and my recorded call.

    Which one do you like better or if you can come with a similar one please feel free to share it.

    agree the second one is better
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  • Profile picture of the author Slade556
    I'd say the first one looks better, it's a more direct approach, more 'aggressive' than the second one. But, in the end, it's a matter of testing them out, people could respond to both or to none of them.
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  • Profile picture of the author dave147
    Originally Posted by Fitnessfreak158 View Post

    I'm trying to choose between these two headlines for a drop card if you don't know what they are it's a great offline marketing tool that looks like a $100 bill but when you open it, It has your marketing message.

    Anyway which headline do you like better for an attention grabber

    1. Are you getting paid what you're worth?

    2. Tired of being over worked and under paid?

    I haven't crafted a full message yet but the card like always will have my personal number my website and my recorded call.

    Which one do you like better or if you can come with a similar one please feel free to share it.
    I'd say the 2nd one...it addresses a lot of people's pain and implies a solution
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