"Hey i see you are part of a group on facebook, how are you doing today?
Thats great, so the reason for the message is would you mind if i asked you some questions about your music?
Great, so perhaps you can bring me up to date on your current wants and desires with your music
Thats great, so if you are like most people im sure you have some fears and frustrations with your music, perhaps you can bring me up to date on your current situation
Okay great, so i could give you some advice on marketing your music if you wanted in exchange for your email
Great, heres the advice....
Let me know what you think..
Great, so are you interested in getting seen and heard by thousands?
okay great, would you like to set up a phone call tomorrow to discuss?
okay great, ill call you tomorrow.."
So how do i shorten this up and just make it so that im just getting appointments?