Here's the script I use for Direct Mail..

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Mr./Ms. ___________

My name is ______________ and I am a local e-commerce business consultant.
I know your time is valuable, as is mine so I'll get right to the point. If I could show you an unused asset that you ALREADY have that could make you thousands of dollars, would you be willing to speak with me for 15 minutes?
This free consultation can save you as much as 50% of your entire monthly advertising budget AND bring you brand new customers at the same time! The best part is that you already have it, so the cost to implement this marketing weapon is minimal.
Please call me at (your number) at your earliest convenience to schedule a free "no strings" consultation. I promise you, it will be worth your time.



Yours in business,
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  • Profile picture of the author Riz
    Interesting.

    1) Where did you get the script from?
    and
    2) How is it converting for you?

    Riz

    Originally Posted by traffictipsnow View Post

    Mr./Ms. ___________

    My name is ______________ and I am a local e-commerce business consultant.
    I know your time is valuable, as is mine so I'll get right to the point. If I could show you an unused asset that you ALREADY have that could make you thousands of dollars, would you be willing to speak with me for 15 minutes?
    This free consultation can save you as much as 50% of your entire monthly advertising budget AND bring you brand new customers at the same time! The best part is that you already have it, so the cost to implement this marketing weapon is minimal.
    Please call me at (your number) at your earliest convenience to schedule a free "no strings" consultation. I promise you, it will be worth your time.



    Yours in business,
    Your name
    Contact info
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    • Profile picture of the author HeyAdMan
      Isn't that the same one that David Preston used (or uses)?
      Sound really familiar.

      David pretty much started the Offline CashCow with this as I recall if this is in fact his script.

      Either way ... it is short and to the point.

      I'd be interested in knowing how it is converting for you as well.

      Randy
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      • Profile picture of the author MattyD
        Originally Posted by HeyAdMan View Post

        Isn't that the same one that David Preston used (or uses)?
        Sound really familiar.
        It's pretty much exactly the same, yeah.

        It does convert nicely though, as do variations on it.
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        • Profile picture of the author Greg guitar
          That is a script I got from Maria Gudelis. Seems kind of odd to say "here is the script I use" and then offer one you got from someone else without giving them credit. Did you even get permission to give away what was once (might still be, for all I know), part of someone else's WSO?
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  • Profile picture of the author TK1
    Isn't this a "script" everybody uses? Typical stuff for me?!

    TK
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  • Profile picture of the author Michael William
    The original creator of this script is uncertain as I have also seen variations of it a few times. I will certainly test it...
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  • Profile picture of the author rolltide
    What service are you promoting with this script?
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  • Profile picture of the author nosweatnobrainer
    Come to think of it, the script does look familiar.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ryan Shaw
    Yeah, Maria uses this similar script. I forget about that. It's been a while since I purchased that.

    An average conversion rate of 1 or 2% would be great.

    Im going to test this script with a new list I got from my chamber of commerce.

    It's pretty basic. Anyone could have written this script.
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