So I met with an owner of a furniture store yesterday who doesn't have a website. I created a website after buying his business .com and it's already ranked #1 for the business name. I couldn't get a wifi connection in his store and they don't have a computer there, so he couldn't actually SEE the site then, but I did give him the domain and also told him that he could just Google his business name and the site is #1. (That got his attention.) So here's my follow up letter that includes my proposal. I need a couple of quick critiques as I'd like this letter to go out in today's mail, in about an hour.
Please Critique My Letter!
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So I met with an owner of a furniture store yesterday who doesn't have a website. I created a website after buying his business .com and it's already ranked #1 for the business name. I couldn't get a wifi connection in his store and they don't have a computer there, so he couldn't actually SEE the site then, but I did give him the domain and also told him that he could just Google his business name and the site is #1. (That got his attention.)
So here's my follow up letter that includes my proposal. I need a couple of quick critiques as I'd like this letter to go out in today's mail, in about an hour.
Okay, so any GLARING errors?
So here's my follow up letter that includes my proposal. I need a couple of quick critiques as I'd like this letter to go out in today's mail, in about an hour.
Okay, so any GLARING errors?
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