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What comes to mind when you see this image

by Curtez Riggs
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I need a favor from my offline warriors. I'm redesigning my website and I would like to get your opinion about this illustration below....



I appreciate the constructive comments.

Thanks
#image #mind
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    • Profile picture of the author Adriaan
      The concept seems great, a way to attract interest and build a list of potential/confirmed clients. It also says what you can do for your customers.

      Good luck.
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    Looking a restaurant hotel, where people are coming for vacation or on special holiday
    A Place for fun and entertainment where people can come with children also
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    • Profile picture of the author Curtez Riggs
      Thanks for the feedback so far. I hope this image presents the fact that we can bring customers to your business. If not any thoughts on what to edit?

      The country background was added to center the viewer on the image, and concept. What I'll also have to consider is if i need to create a more "business district" look, to provide a better framework.
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      • Profile picture of the author Susan Hope
        Originally Posted by soldierscredit View Post

        Thanks for the feedback so far. I hope this image presents the fact that we can bring customers to your business. If not any thoughts on what to edit?

        The country background was added to center the viewer on the image, and concept. What I'll also have to consider is if i need to create a more "business district" look, to provide a better framework.
        I like the overall concept my only small thing would be - which falls in a little with your wanting more of a business district, is to play down the pastel colours a bit if at all possible - pastel (to me) is always a bit of a girl color and you want this to appeal to all business people.. less pastel might look more business like.. but just a thought

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  • Profile picture of the author Adriaan
    Maybe you could change the look of your building to reflect the increase in profits you experience, because of your marketing actions (more money). An example might be a flashy car in the driveway, gold and mirror trimmings on the building, spotlights highlighting the company name etc. You standing in front of your building, smartly dressed, with a big smile.

    Your next door neighbor might be a run down building because he doesn't advertise/ market at all... gray building, leaking faucets, empty billboard (or with a closing-down sale) etc.
    Your neighbor is also standing in front of his building, but he's not smiling and he's clothing is patched etc.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dexx
    Okay, I'll be Mr Bad Guy on this one...

    The Good: Great picture, very colorful, and there's a lot going on to look at...

    The Bad: The above.

    Originally Posted by soldierscredit View Post

    Thanks for the feedback so far. I hope this image presents the fact that we can bring customers to your business. If not any thoughts on what to edit?
    You shouldn't be HOPING that your audience "get the idea" that your business can help them...you should be using a HEADLINE to TELL them that very message.

    Your target market are busy people. You should not be banking YOUR POTENTIAL PROFITS on them looking at a pretty picture, assuming that picture represents what your business does, and then excitedly scrolling down the page to contact you.

    You should have powerful, to-the-point, and beneficial headline statement that tells them EXACTLY why they should stay on your website and keep reading (at which point you will further tell them how you will help them and get them excited.)

    Summary: Nice picture, might make your website look good, but most likely (if you split-test it) will end up hurting your conversation ratio vs a great headline instead.

    You don't want any distractions on your page. You have a short period of time to convince them to stay. The content above the fold is insanely important, taking up that space with the above picture is counter-productive. (Maybe put the picture in the footer?)

    ~Dexx
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  • Profile picture of the author Kyle Kasterson
    Personally I like it, but I will agree with a few of the comments made above by Dexx.

    Although if you yourself drew that, you have some very nice artistic ability. Nice work =)
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    • Profile picture of the author Curtez Riggs
      Thanks again for the feedback. The image will be altered to reflect a business district, and the pastels colors will be changed.

      Headline will also be featured on the top of the image...

      Thanks everyone!
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