i have had a lot of PM's asking what kind of message i send out when getting clients for fan pages.
I just use a short easy message.
for the subject i just put "hi was just looking at your site"
this makes them open as there is no sale in the subject.
then for the message i just put something like
"Hi just mailing you to ask you one question how much are you making from facebook? if the answer is £0 then why? social media is HOT!" just check this info out it will blow your mind!"
(link to sales page)
and that's about it nothing fancy short and to the point.
it has worked wonders for me.
so guys what's your take on it? what do you do and how has it worked out for you?