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Please rate my landing page on a 1-10 scale

by Saluki Guy
24 replies
Hello,

I am a Facebook fanpage developer and I would like some feedback on this Facebook-based landing page I just designed. Any constructive criticism would be welcome. I really think Facebook is a great "gateway" to send people through before they go to a website.

Please rate 1-10 (10 highest). Thanks.

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#110 #landing #page #rate #scale
  • Profile picture of the author dmramirez
    8. What a cliffhanger. I hope you get traffic off of your WF post as well.
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  • Profile picture of the author Falkonator
    It looks great. I give it an 8. I would make the profile picture bigger.

    Also I thought that you are not supposed to have media autoplaying on fanpages.
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  • Profile picture of the author Keen creations
    8, thats pretty cool. never seen something like that on FB before.
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  • Profile picture of the author thesorcerersapprentice
    Very good... liked it a lot 7
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  • Profile picture of the author SiteSmarty
    It's great. 8.2
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  • Profile picture of the author aminur
    8. it's cool to be honest. some thing different for a email submit offer
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  • Profile picture of the author Richard Groom
    wow very slick...one of the first facebook landing pages i have seen using sound and moving graphics.

    I am actually very active on facebook and i would like to ask:

    1. what is your strategy for getting more 'likes' ?
    2. how are you spreading the word for your page?

    would love to know more about problems/challenges you have encountered!

    rich
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    • Profile picture of the author Richard Groom
      sorry i forgot my score...definately worthy of an 8!
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      • Profile picture of the author White80
        The primary purpose of a FB Welcome Page is to make you click.

        I think it accomplishes that for an American audience, if it was for Tescos/ Asda/ Sainsburys in the UK I would click.

        9/10

        Joe
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Earle
    Excellent work, creates curiosity and the audio and graphics should improve conversion.

    9/10

    Well done and good luck

    Is this for personal use or a future WSO?
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  • Profile picture of the author Mutiny
    9- Great job! I can see this really appealing to the masses.
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  • Profile picture of the author tristatemedia
    worth an 8....looks unique
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  • Profile picture of the author stone2010
    Great idea... whoever sees it why wouldnt they click? curiosity its going to make them like the page lol
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  • Profile picture of the author RKCastillo
    I give it a 7 only because it took nearly 5 or more seconds for it to load up.

    What are you using to autoplay the audio?
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    • Profile picture of the author Kevin AKA Hubcap
      Originally Posted by RKCastillo View Post

      I give it a 7 only because it took nearly 5 or more seconds for it to load up.

      What are you using to autoplay the audio?
      I agree.

      In fact I almost clicked out *but* the audio started playing.

      Are you using Flash and if so are you worried about iOS devices not being able to read it?

      Why not do a simple video with the mom, her two kids, and all the groceries she received for free (encoded in H.264).

      The way that it looks now and more importantly, to my ear, the narration sounds like something you'd hear on some commercial selling cut rate insurance.

      I feel the page is lost between being slick/corporate and homemade and for me it doesn't work. It doesn't look real.

      Just my opinion.

      YMMV
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  • Profile picture of the author davidtong
    I'd give it an 8! The profile pic is quite low res though... The voice-talent is very good as well!
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  • Profile picture of the author zoro
    It looks great, but the audio autoplay turns me off.
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  • Profile picture of the author James Richardson
    good job. I am going to rate it at 8..I think you just have to tweak a little more on the visuals..Audio's fine...
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  • Profile picture of the author blillard
    very interesting. I like it and I give it an 8.5
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  • Profile picture of the author celestrist
    nice landing page.
    but it doesn't sound like a mom.
    lol
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  • Profile picture of the author redlegrich
    I hate autoplay with audio. I clicked away immediately. I'm sure it's nice, but when I hate autoplay that starts blaring away I click away straight away.
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  • Profile picture of the author JammieWilliam
    Excellent work. Very cool graphics. I will score it 8.5
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  • Profile picture of the author art72
    Give it a 7.5 mainly cause the pic was so so...not a fan of auto-play (although with that layout it works well)

    Great niche as it will help solve a lot of peoples problems. Loaded instantly for me with no delays. (4g Verizon MiFi/Win7/FF5) <--dunno if that matters?


    We have friends that shop like that...been to lazy to explore it myself, but definitely a HOT niche!
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    • Profile picture of the author mattgsilver
      I'd give it an 8 but FB will pull it for autoplay.
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