Please rate my landing page on a 1-10 scale

by Saluki Guy

Posted: 10 years ago 24 replies

OFFLINE MARKETING

Hello,

I am a Facebook fanpage developer and I would like some feedback on this Facebook-based landing page I just designed. Any constructive criticism would be welcome. I really think Facebook is a great "gateway" to send people through before they go to a website.

Please rate 1-10 (10 highest). Thanks.

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dmramirez 10 years ago

8. What a cliffhanger. I hope you get traffic off of your WF post as well.
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Falkonator 10 years ago

It looks great. I give it an 8. I would make the profile picture bigger.

Also I thought that you are not supposed to have media autoplaying on fanpages.
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Keen creations 10 years ago

8, thats pretty cool. never seen something like that on FB before.
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thesorcerersapprentice 10 years ago

Very good... liked it a lot 7
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SiteSmarty 10 years ago

It's great. 8.2
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aminur 10 years ago

8. it's cool to be honest. some thing different for a email submit offer
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Richard Groom 10 years ago

wow very slick...one of the first facebook landing pages i have seen using sound and moving graphics.

I am actually very active on facebook and i would like to ask:

1. what is your strategy for getting more 'likes' ?
2. how are you spreading the word for your page?

would love to know more about problems/challenges you have encountered!

rich
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- Richard Groom 10 years ago
  
  sorry i forgot my score...definately worthy of an 8!
  
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  White80 10 years ago
  
  The primary purpose of a FB Welcome Page is to make you click.
  
  I think it accomplishes that for an American audience, if it was for Tescos/ Asda/ Sainsburys in the UK I would click.
  
  9/10
  
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Mark Earle 10 years ago

Excellent work, creates curiosity and the audio and graphics should improve conversion.

9/10

Well done and good luck

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Mutiny 10 years ago

9- Great job! I can see this really appealing to the masses.
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tristatemedia 10 years ago

worth an 8....looks unique
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stone2010 10 years ago

Great idea... whoever sees it why wouldnt they click? curiosity its going to make them like the page lol
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RKCastillo 10 years ago

I give it a 7 only because it took nearly 5 or more seconds for it to load up.

What are you using to autoplay the audio?
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- Kevin AKA Hubcap 10 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by RKCastillo
  
  I give it a 7 only because it took nearly 5 or more seconds for it to load up.
  
  What are you using to autoplay the audio?
  
  I agree.
  
  In fact I almost clicked out *but* the audio started playing.
  
  Are you using Flash and if so are you worried about iOS devices not being able to read it?
  
  Why not do a simple video with the mom, her two kids, and all the groceries she received for free (encoded in H.264).
  
  The way that it looks now and more importantly, to my ear, the narration sounds like something you'd hear on some commercial selling cut rate insurance.
  
  I feel the page is lost between being slick/corporate and homemade and for me it doesn't work. It doesn't look real.
  
  Just my opinion.
  
  YMMV
  
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davidtong 10 years ago

I'd give it an 8! The profile pic is quite low res though... The voice-talent is very good as well!
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zoro 10 years ago

It looks great, but the audio autoplay turns me off.
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James Richardson 10 years ago

good job. I am going to rate it at 8..I think you just have to tweak a little more on the visuals..Audio's fine...
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blillard 10 years ago

very interesting. I like it and I give it an 8.5
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celestrist 10 years ago

nice landing page.
but it doesn't sound like a mom.
lol
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redlegrich 10 years ago

I hate autoplay with audio. I clicked away immediately. I'm sure it's nice, but when I hate autoplay that starts blaring away I click away straight away.
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JammieWilliam 10 years ago

Excellent work. Very cool graphics. I will score it 8.5
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art72 10 years ago

Give it a 7.5 mainly cause the pic was so so...not a fan of auto-play (although with that layout it works well)

Great niche as it will help solve a lot of peoples problems. Loaded instantly for me with no delays. (4g Verizon MiFi/Win7/FF5) <--dunno if that matters?

We have friends that shop like that...been to lazy to explore it myself, but definitely a HOT niche!
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- mattgsilver 10 years ago
  
  I'd give it an 8 but FB will pull it for autoplay.
  
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