The winner was a french virtual assistant, this is her current website:
Accueil de votre télésecrétaire (it's in french)
I worked on the new design and delivered it to a week later:
Marie-Ange Rottino - Sécrétaire indépendante & polyvalente à Nice
The thing is that she was not very excited about the new design and thinks that her website is better than mine!!
so what do you think guys? which design do you think may convert better and attract more customers?