Can You Grade My Sales Letter?
Would do you think the following revision?
(salutation)
(introduction showing your experience, expertise)
I would like to know if you'd be interested in obtaining free leads for your (type of services your prospect sells).
Why free?
I understand that in order to market myself as a lead generation specialist I have to provide incredible value, free of charge, to prospects before they consider investing in my services.
I have recently done so with a local business in Cleveland, giving them $100,000 worth of leads in a 12 month period, $10,000 of which converted.
I understand that you have probably received unsolicited phone calls or emails regarding marketing services. My services, however, are free of charge for the first 5 leads (in the form of phone calls or emails to you). There is no obligation, no contract. After that, you decide whether it is worth it to continue using my services for a cost, based on how many of those 5 leads converted to paying clients.
Please call me at (XXX-XXX-XXXX) or email me at blank@gmail.com if you want to learn more about obtaining free scheduled appointments for your services.
Deliver Bigger.
Deliver Bigger.
Deliver Bigger.
Bjarne Viken
Conversion Strategist
Skype: bjarne.viken | bjarne@scaleup.com.au | LinkedIn: http://au.linkedin.com/in/bjarneviken | http://www.scaleup.com.au | Free consultation: http://calendly.com/bjarne-viken
Deliver Bigger.
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