I'm trying to write a good one call close script for "guaranteed first page ranking" seo for 1 keyword for local small businesses. This is to get us in the door, prove we are skilled and unique. What do you think?
Hi __________ is this a okay time to talk? |
Alright what I'd like to do is tell you why I called and then you can decide whether we'll keep talking or not, is that okay?
My name is _______ with Sales Source Visibility Group, you may have heard of us.
Real quick, the reason for the call is that for we are offering businesses with websites like yours a guaranteed first page spot on Google for one payment of $299, we guarantee that we will get you onto the first page for your biggest keyword in less than 120 days. If we don’t you will receive a full automatic refund. We’re doing this to show businesses we’re not just like every other internet marketing company, we are extremely skilled and know you only want to pay for results.
Does that sound like a fair deal or what?
Answer any questions they may have.
We take all payments via major credit card, mastercard, American express, visa and discover, I am going to have the owner Max Berry give you a call to get your information and open your account with us. When would be a good time today for him to call?
I usually work with a center I trust and feel comfortable with when it's my own things we're selling but they really do not like to take credit card information.
Any thoughts/comments/critiques not only on the script but the process and TO would be more than appreciated.