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by atrbiz
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#feedback #landing #needed #page
  • Profile picture of the author Vlom
    It's a bit too "fat" i think , the information is kinda hard to read ..

    May be try to get all the information in a smaller area, and get the portfolio items clickable, etc ..

    Best of luck.



    Mehdi
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  • Profile picture of the author pwk2000
    I don't think you can call this a landing page if it has no call to action anywhere? A contact form is not a call to act, and it sits almost below the fold (depending on screen resolution).

    Also, logo does not seem to match the design, kinda stands out in a bad way. Page is lacking credibility.

    My suggestion is cut the black heading on top to 1/3 the size and add a real call to action.
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    • Profile picture of the author atrbiz
      Originally Posted by Vlom View Post

      It's a bit too "fat" i think , the information is kinda hard to read ..

      May be try to get all the information in a smaller area, and get the portfolio items clickable, etc ..

      Best of luck.



      Mehdi
      Originally Posted by pwk2000 View Post

      I don't think you can call this a landing page if it has no call to action anywhere? A contact form is not a call to act, and it sits almost below the fold (depending on screen resolution).

      Also, logo does not seem to match the design, kinda stands out in a bad way. Page is lacking credibility.

      My suggestion is cut the black heading on top to 1/3 the size and add a real call to action.
      Thanks for the feedback guys. It's a work in progress.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rus Sells
    Move the contact form above the fold and get rid of the second form, no need to confuse visitors with two forms to fill out.
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  • Profile picture of the author ebizman
    looks nice, got my attention
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