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Review My Site Please

by Bruha
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Ok, just got done redesigning my site to sell offline services to local restaurants and businesses. Thank you for taking the time to check it out and leave some comments.

Mobile Marketing Bend Oregon | Local Mobile Launch
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  • Profile picture of the author vndnbrgj
    Okay...so I didn't go any further than the homepage.

    Your site doesn't format well on a mobile phone.
    Your site takes over 5 mins to load...I tried twice gave up after 5 mins.

    So, to be honest... I think you need your own services before you sell them.
    Your site seems responsive. But, doesn't format well.
    Are you selling responsive sites or stand alone mobile sites.
    I think if you are selling stand alone mobiles, you need one.
    I can't imagine walking into a business and telling them to pull up theirs and then yourrs.
    Sitting there for several mins in awkward silence.

    You say on yourr site that it needs to load fast and be effective, and yours isn't either one.
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  • Profile picture of the author xtirpata
    Yup. Practice what you preach!

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  • Profile picture of the author CageyVet
    I completely agree, your website does not look at good at all on my android phone .I can not access the main top navigation to go to any other page but home page and the way the responsive theme moves your content around makes it very hard to understand.

    If you are trying to sell people on having a targeted mobile site and yours is just a poorly responsive theme, then you are not really doing your clients justice.

    I am not sure what your 14 day trial optin is actually for since it just states 14 day free trial.

    Also you are using ALOT of statistics which in my opinion can lower your conversion rate for smarter business owners that are willing to spend larger sums of money.

    Oh and btw, the Other Services page where you mention SEO services. You actually do not have a meta description tag setup for that page, which is kind of ironic.
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