Please critique my letter
Hey Jim,
I've been thinking a lot about your goals and how you said you could use some help in sales. And, as me and Nicki talked about, I could sell websites and other services for you but I know your ultimate goal is growth and based on the information I have, I'm confident your biggest opportunity for growth at this point is strategizing and optimizing everything you're already doing which is my specialty any way.
You're obviously already doing very well especially since you don't really have much of a staff (I really don't know how you do it) but even the most successful businesses have plenty of room for improvement.
There is no doubt in my mind that we can get your company making a lot more money doing less work which will free up more of your time so you don't get swamped as much (somehow I think you'll find ways to keep yourself busy though .
Of course at that point, hiring more sales people and staff to make use of your your 3000+ sq ft office to scale your operation will probably be the ticket, but to me it makes the most sense to optimize first, then focus on expansion. Do you agree? And the bigger the company, the harder it is to optimize. If we put the systems in place now, then all we'll have to do is tweak as we go.
If you're wondering about my qualifications and abilities in this area, in the mid '90's I worked for a large publishing company in Chicago and greatly improved their “reader services” department by optimizing and putting the proper systems in place to add significantly to the profitability of the company. Then in the early to mid 2000's, I built my own successful retail business from the ground up using the same principles and have continued my business education so today my knowledge and skill level is far superior.
Also, I started rewriting your website copy like we talked about but it felt like I was putting the cart before the horse because your marketing strategy really hasn't crystallized for me. I feel like we need to get clear on that first. I've spent some time brainstorming that and have some
ideas we can go over.
And of course, its going to be a little trickier to flesh out a win-win arrangement than just hiring me as a salesman and I think it would be best to sit down and talk about how we can work together and help each other meet our goals.
Let me know what your schedule is for next week and we'll make it happen.
Have a great weekend (42 on Sunday woohoo!)
Paul
PS Great meeting you guys last week!
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