[Please Help Critique] Sending Postcard To Business Owners - Bob Ross Giant Postcard
I am contemplating the Bob Ross giant postcard business. The way I want to ideally prospect is by sending out postcards to business owners. For the purposes of being able to scale this to several suburbs, I want to remove the necessity to cold call or to do cold walk-ins. If I can nail prospecting by direct mail, it will making scaling a lot easier for me.
In my local area there are 10,500 homes with approximately 475 businesses. Not all businesses have shopfronts, the above figure includes businesses like plumbers, electricians etc who do not necessarily have a physical location in my area - but their business is registered in my area and so they are part of the statistic.
I intend to send a postcard to each of the 475 businesses, promoting the giant postcard. In the end, I hope to convert 16 of those into paying clients on the first month. This represents a 3.3% conversion which I understand to be achievable, but not easy in any regard.
Hence, I am here - hoping you can help me out with what I should be focusing on to get this rolling.
Say for the purposes of this thread, we'll call the target town 'Reservoir'.
Front side of post card:
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Attention Business owners of Reservoir
We're sending a GIANT postcard to all 10,500 homes in Reservoir. The postcard has only 16 spaces for local businesses to advertise on.
Do not miss your opportunity to advertise your business directly to your most local 10,500 homes, where 20,000 Reservoir residents live.
Call 00 0000 0000 to secure your spot now
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I have not yet thought much on the back side of the post card. Any ideas on what to put on the back?
Regarding pricing, what's better: quote it as '5c per home' or '$500'?
I am sure there can be a lot of improvement made. I will appreciate any help!
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