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I built a landing page.. But nobody's subscribing to my list

by MetallicaFan
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Hi,

I built a PPC campign on Bing
The campign is for the Clickbank' product "3 week diet"
I built a landing page to capture my traffic emails,
But it seems that nobody is accepting the verification email
This is my landing page: The 3 week diet
What am I doing wrong?

Thanks
#built #landing #list #page #subscribing
  • Profile picture of the author MetallicaFan
    Anyone............?
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  • Profile picture of the author Chandrapaul
    looks very ordinary and old design.make modern looking design...it should be eye catching
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    • Profile picture of the author MetallicaFan
      Originally Posted by Chandrapaul View Post

      looks very ordinary and old design.make modern looking design...it should be eye catching
      It should be like this? When people here tell me to build a list, they mean to do it like this, Or there is an autoresponder who let me send people messages without verification ?
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      • Profile picture of the author Jonathan Vodini
        Originally Posted by MetallicaFan View Post

        It should be like this? When people here tell me to build a list, they mean to do it like this, Or there is an autoresponder who let me send people messages without verification ?
        of course you should switch the confirmation off, otherwise you will maximize the chance to get not sub into your list, what autoresponder you have?
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        • Profile picture of the author MetallicaFan
          Originally Posted by Jonathan Vodini View Post

          of course you should switch the confirmation off, otherwise you will maximize the chance to get not sub into your list, what autoresponder you have?
          How can I do that?
          This is the options I have
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          • Profile picture of the author dshipman
            Put a few benefits and features of the diet on the landing page. Also, that bright red font on the gray background hurts my eyes. A more subtle red on a white background would be easier on the eyes imo.
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  • Profile picture of the author doubleaa
    Listen I am not a great landing page creator but I must say about this landing page and that is this is very poor quality landing page. Try to build some attractive landing page. Some people say "dude...this is just a landing page. why bothering so much with it?". But my friend remember this is the first step for you to your traffic to get converted from just an ordinary traffic to a buyer. So I personally think your first impression must be at the level of great. OK?

    Search on google for landing page ideas for your niche. If it is Diet then search for landing page template for Diet program. Lots of ideas free templates you will get and I am sure about that.
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    • Profile picture of the author rick323
      I'd suggest staying away from aweber when it comes to making pages, I suggest you make a website, add your form onto your website and make the website look a little more professional than what you have there. Even if you dont really know how to design webpages there is always tools like optimize press that can really make it easier to create a professional looking website. oh and yes lose the verification,
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  • Profile picture of the author Binujha
    Recreate your landing page. Using relevant keywords and an appealing landing page alone can get you success with campaigns. An attractive landing page is very much essential.
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  • Profile picture of the author esmarshall
    You Don't Need A Super Fancy Landing Page, But This Does Need Some Work
    Also Might Want To Rethink The Headline

    I Would Say It's Abit Broad

    Target A Particular Audience......e.g Mothers With New Borns (This Is An Example, Not A Suggestion...)
    Then Tailor The Message To Appeal To That Audience

    Hope This Helps
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  • Profile picture of the author yukon
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    Would you submit your email to a webpage with no info. & looked like a 3rd grader built the page?

    Welcome to earth.
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  • Profile picture of the author n3o
    why not create few landing pages and split test it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jake Howard
    Hi MetallicaFan,

    I recently just created a landing page after doing a heap of research, and getting advice off forum members.

    The biggest issue I see with your Landing Page is the Trust Factor. I am sorry to say it, but unfortunately your landing page just looks dodgy with a capital D. It gives me no confidence in what you are offering, and it also makes me question if I can trust the person who I am supplying my details to.

    Take a look at my landing page, and then ask yourself. Of the two landing pages, which one do you think users would trust the most?

    Corflute Signs Lading Page | Ink Signs

    Hope this helps.

    Cheers

    Jake
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  • Profile picture of the author jojolescargot
    You can found free squeeze page /landing page on google in 20 second and they are beautifull , and like Jake say, when i see a LP like that i never subscribe
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  • Profile picture of the author solarwarrior
    Still kudo to him for taking action.

    Most people don't even take the first step to action.

    I have actually covered this in my thread, take a look at it if you are free.
    Pm me if you want your lander to set up asap for free.
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