by johnu
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Any thought if this will be a good converting landing page? This is my second attempt.. I am working on the start and stop point of the video. I am a little concerned that it may need more info about our service on the page.

Thanks in advance for your feedback, please don't hold back.

Www.startnow.aesofutah.com
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  • Profile picture of the author foreverstray
    Why dont you test it and find out. It is not always easy to guess whether a landing page will be successful or not. Only testing can tell you that.
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  • Profile picture of the author jeba1975
    Spy your competitor landing pages and tweak to get good results. Ispionage will help for this.
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  • Profile picture of the author winnermarketing
    the video is nice.
    the text need some impact sentences, i.g.:

    "Why are you still spending money for bad isolation...."

    "you can solve this problem in this way"

    (bad isolatio)
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  • Profile picture of the author jamescanz
    Originally Posted by johnu View Post

    Any thought if this will be a good converting landing page? This is my second attempt.. I am working on the start and stop point of the video. I am a little concerned that it may need more info about our service on the page.

    Thanks in advance for your feedback, please don't hold back.
    You have enough done to have it go live...

    (you can always take out the video and test with it after)

    Send traffic to it asap and THEN look to make appropriate changes.
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  • Profile picture of the author suvob777
    It is good , I think it would be better if you add terms and privacy policy.
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  • Profile picture of the author solarwarrior
    If you have listen to me and implemented the changes (which you did), then you are good enough to go.
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  • Profile picture of the author World Leads
    I beleive that it's almost impossible to tell if your landing page is good or not. You need to test, test and test. Only testing will give you the results you are after!
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    • Profile picture of the author xandiman1
      Great landingpage, but there is a problem with the view on a mobile device. I have sent you a pm with the screenshot.
      The text is going into your optin box.
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  • Profile picture of the author SandraDLaurean
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    The information provided in your landing page is quite enough to understand users for what you are selling ,only you have to do is drive traffic towards your landing page.Implement some good off page seo techniques & make some quality back links so that your landing page drive more traffic .
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  • Profile picture of the author powerofschool
    Hi ,

    I can suggest you only one thing . Below video you have a empty space . You can add some relevant image over there. Also you can try with name and number option with Request Call back button for more leads.

    All the best
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  • Profile picture of the author BradleyMcClellan
    It's good enough to have it entered in to the race! Give it a go man, don't try to be perfectionist..
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